bbb Posted March 9, 2015 Author Share Posted March 9, 2015 I think the Alt logo is much better. I'd keep the waves enclosed in the circle, personally. I feel like something's not quite right about the wordmark on there though... I just can't put my finger on what that is.Yes l corrected the waves Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 12, 2015 Author Share Posted March 12, 2015 Honolulu uniforms (C&C please) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JT17 Posted March 12, 2015 Share Posted March 12, 2015 i would either put some of that red in the home and away sets or just leave it out completely and make a yellow alternate and a orange shark fin so it matches the other shark. Also the away socks could use some color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kansas sports fan Posted March 14, 2015 Share Posted March 14, 2015 I really like the shoulder design and the tips of the pants. I agree that the alternate should match the colors of the normal uniforms. The alternate logo on the alternate helmet looks good too. Acts 16:31 - And they replied: "Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ and you will be saved, you and your household."John 3:16 - "For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him shall not perish, but have everlasting life."John 14:6 - Jesus said to him, "I am the way, and the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father, except through me." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 14, 2015 Author Share Posted March 14, 2015 i would either put some of that red in the home and away sets or just leave it out completely and make a yellow alternate and a orange shark fin so it matches the other shark. Also the away socks could use some color.I really like the shoulder design and the tips of the pants. I agree that the alternate should match the colors of the normal uniforms. The alternate logo on the alternate helmet looks good too.l tried to put the alt colors in the home and away set but it doesn't work. l think that this alternate's an alt like the green bay onel know that the packers one is a throwback, but brown and blue aren't used in the home & away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slikye1 Posted March 14, 2015 Share Posted March 14, 2015 Love that alternate helmet logo and the shoulder design...But IMO change the NOB's font will be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted March 14, 2015 Share Posted March 14, 2015 i would either put some of that red in the home and away sets or just leave it out completely and make a yellow alternate and a orange shark fin so it matches the other shark. Also the away socks could use some color.I really like the shoulder design and the tips of the pants. I agree that the alternate should match the colors of the normal uniforms. The alternate logo on the alternate helmet looks good too.l tried to put the alt colors in the home and away set but it doesn't work. l think that this alternate's an alt like the green bay onel know that the packers one is a throwback, but brown and blue aren't used in the home & awayIt's a throwback, that's why they don't use it in the home and away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 14, 2015 Author Share Posted March 14, 2015 New font Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 14, 2015 Share Posted March 14, 2015 I think you need a bit of maroon on the orange or white, even just as a trim. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JB83 Posted March 15, 2015 Share Posted March 15, 2015 That alt helmet looks a lot like the San Jose Sharks helmet I made in my crossover... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 15, 2015 Author Share Posted March 15, 2015 That alt helmet looks a lot like the San Jose Sharks helmet I made in my crossover...l swear l didn't copy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 15, 2015 Author Share Posted March 15, 2015 A bit of maroon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpaul2120 Posted March 15, 2015 Share Posted March 15, 2015 I like all of it but I think the alternate jersey for Honolulu looks too much like the Redskins. Maybe try a red and a hot pink to represent Maui and Hawai'i and also a touch of gray or orange Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted March 17, 2015 Share Posted March 17, 2015 That alt helmet looks a lot like the San Jose Sharks helmet I made in my crossover...That's because the logo he made is basically the same as the Shark's alt, but with worse waves. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 17, 2015 Author Share Posted March 17, 2015 First mock up for Oregon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted March 17, 2015 Share Posted March 17, 2015 Yikes, that needs a lot of work. First off, skin isn't pink. Outlines are too thin. It's too realistic, and the colors are very strange. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted March 18, 2015 Share Posted March 18, 2015 These logos just don't look like actual logos. Most of the same stuff from paper thin, and the wordmark needs to look connected to the logo not just Microsoft word under it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted March 18, 2015 Share Posted March 18, 2015 I think the overall pose of the lumberjack is good, actually, but yes, it doesn't look like a logo. Look up Frasier Davidson's tutorials, they'll give you an idea of how to use line weights laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 18, 2015 Author Share Posted March 18, 2015 I think the overall pose of the lumberjack is good, actually, but yes, it doesn't look like a logo. Look up Frasier Davidson's tutorials, they'll give you an idea of how to use line weightsl'll look the tutorials and l'll also download illustrator because now l'm using inkscape Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 18, 2015 Share Posted March 18, 2015 EEEEW I hate that font. Get or make something more athletic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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