jkrdevil Posted July 14, 2004 Share Posted July 14, 2004 I am working on this ram logo and need help with the shading. Comments and suggetions needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat Posted July 15, 2004 Share Posted July 15, 2004 He looks to happy. Id alter the mouth Proud owner of the Utah Pioneers of the Continnental Baseball League.PACKER BACKER FOREVER! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted July 15, 2004 Share Posted July 15, 2004 Add some shading under the jaw line and also on the neck. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gorams1 Posted July 15, 2004 Share Posted July 15, 2004 I'd add more detail on the eye, and alter the mouth, so it looks a little pissed off, then you got an awsome logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jkrdevil Posted July 15, 2004 Author Share Posted July 15, 2004 Ok, here's version 2. I changed the mouth and added sharding under the jaw and on the horns. Again I ask for comments and suggestions on how to make this better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pittunited Posted July 15, 2004 Share Posted July 15, 2004 I would rotate the head a little counterclockwise, to make it look like he's about to charge. OWNER -- Pittsburgh Spiders (UL) * Dynamo Missouri (PLA) * Montreal Maroons (SHL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoneranger Posted July 16, 2004 Share Posted July 16, 2004 Yes, some kind of angle to add a little visual tension. Maybe even slant the whole logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jkrdevil Posted July 16, 2004 Author Share Posted July 16, 2004 BUMP... Anyone else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddie010 Posted July 16, 2004 Share Posted July 16, 2004 Perhaps add more detail to the horns? Maybe give them a light texture or something?Just a suggestion... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paynomind Posted July 16, 2004 Share Posted July 16, 2004 I really like it in the form you first posted, and only have some small reccomendations to it in tha form (the grey under the chin makes the grey end up looking just like an outline.. i'd lose it.)The grey at the eye seems mispalced a little.. i'd make the grey gradually thicker as it came up the nose, then as it arched up over the eye, vary the thickness back down at the peak of the arch.Also the spot where the near horn meets the head seems awkward just a bit, but i cant quit determine what to suggest.I'd leave the main parts of this intact, the white space looks great. Dont fill in any un-needed lines or colros in the horns ad head.. ithe white looks clean and crisp.Very nicely done! NCFA Sunset Beach Tech - Octopi ΓΔΒ! Going to college gets you closer to the real world, kind of like climbing a tree gets you closer to the moon. "...a nice illustration of what you get when skill, talent, and precedent are deducted from 'creativity.' " - James Howard Kunstler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kineaggie05 Posted July 16, 2004 Share Posted July 16, 2004 Adding to paynomind's comment, I think the far horn may look awkward because it appears to go straight back instead of going back at a slight angle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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