AAO Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 The colors are my school's original colors: Black, Light Blue, and Silver. All logos, wordmarks, uniforms, court designs, shirt designs, and sport sub logo designs are made by me, and I want to propose these to my school, here are the logos, i plan on doing each sport at the varsity level, here are the logos:EDITED VERSION FOR LOGO PACKAGE:(bigger in size, larger and bolder "Centreville" in main logo, edited the "W", brought "C" to the front in secondary)ORIGINAL VERSION:Here are the athletic programs i've done so far: Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted August 6, 2004 Author Share Posted August 6, 2004 i also need a football field rasterized, please that would be great...and oh yea, the player names on the uniforms are all actual players on the teams. Except, for myself, Bakar, I am only on the basketball team, wearing number 25, and was on the football team my sophomore year, wearing number 25. I don't play baseball. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primal Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 Can we see a larger version of the primary? It looks OK at that small size but the details aren't really visible enough to judge. The wordmark is pretty good, but can you do something to the base of the W? It needs to like more like a W than III. And the school name should probably be a bit larger - even though I understand you want the focus to be on 'Wildcats', it looks badly out of proportion.Not liking the secondary - idea is fine, execution seems like it was a bit of an afterthought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 On the football set: IMO, the helmet logo would look better if reversed, so that the cat was facing forward. Also, I think that the side-gussets (is that what they're called?) on football jerseys should match the side stripes on pants, I think it looks a little awkward having dark sides on the white shirt and light-blue on the pants. Perhaps light sides on the white, or maybe another pants option? "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 i like it overall man, but im not really feeling the baseball jersey, probably since that is a pretty far fetched idea for one, maybe clean it up a lil. overall these look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pollux Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 AAO, The whole package looks really good! I really like the color combination. There is a good balance between the black and pale blue. The logo is good, but I'm not sure about the wordmark (don't know why though). Maybe it contrasts too much with the t-shirts wordmark (which you could use as primary wordmark). What font is this (t-shirts)?The football package is crisp and clean. I especially love the black unis, they remind me of a alternate uniform the Montreal Alouettes wore a couple of seasons ago... Basketball looks good too, but not sure about the baseball jerseys. But again, probably because it isn't traditional...Here's a picture of that third Al's jersey:I hope that your school will be happy with what you've designed for them! And if they do, please post pictures here!!!It's nice to see you hone your skills in so little time! Keep up the good work! Four times IHL Nielson Cup Champions - Montréal Shamrocks (2008-2009 // 2009-2010 // 2012-2013 // 2014-2015) Five times TNFF Confederation Cup Champions - Yellowknife Eagles (2009 CC VI // 2010 CC VII // 2015 CC XII // 2017 CC XIV // 2018 CC XV) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giles22 Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 I like all the concepts. The baseball jersey is really futuristic, but really nice. I would love to see more styles come into baseball jersies. Great work on all of them. They look great. Two thumbs up from me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lopernv Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 All are all awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!! Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 make one jersey the all baby clue with black and white stripes then it would be awesome. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 I really like the cat. Smart package. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted August 6, 2004 Author Share Posted August 6, 2004 I think it looks a little awkward having dark sides on the white shirt and light-blue on the pants. Perhaps light sides on the white, or maybe another pants option?Actually, my school currently uses the scheme i posted, with the mismatching side stripes. It actually looks really good on the field. But i'll work with it and see what i can do. My school currently uses the Broncos striping. We're only aloud to have one pair of pants and one helmet, btw. but im not really feeling the baseball jersey, probably since that is a pretty far fetched idea for one, maybe clean it up a lilwell i figured since there's too much tradition in the MLB to modernize or change any uniforms, it could be done with high school, where the young fresh talent come from with no tradition like the MLB to hold on to. Can we see a larger version of the primary? It looks OK at that small size but the details aren't really visible enough to judge. The wordmark is pretty good, but can you do something to the base of the W? It needs to like more like a W than III. And the school name should probably be a bit larger - even though I understand you want the focus to be on 'Wildcats', it looks badly out of proportion.Agreed, man, agreed. i'll make it larger soon. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted August 6, 2004 Author Share Posted August 6, 2004 ok edited the logo package, (larger "Centreville" in primary logo, bigger in size overall, edited "W" in wordmark, edited secondary logo by bringing "C" to the front): Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted August 7, 2004 Author Share Posted August 7, 2004 bump, i really needed some more input on this, considering i do plan on submitting these to my school. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 if i were really good at illustrator, i'd change it to vector format for you. thats all you really need now, and i agree with you on the baseball jersey. we had an interesting one in high school too (our school colors were orange and brown). i think all it needs now is vectorized to make it pop and they would take it in a heartbeat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eqtmgr Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 Well you asked for some suggerstions, so here they are:The football and basketball unis are completely doable by most companies. A lot of the companies that are makin unis are copying Nike's uni templates and adding whatever font that they use. The baseball unis are not doable becuase I do not know of any company that uses a template like that. However, if they wanted to go custom, let me know because I have afriend that works in the field and he can hook you up.The logo and wordmark that you created is sweet. I would agree with those who said that the mascot's head needs to be filpped the other way. When putting a logo on a helmet, it would be a little awkward to put it on. The flat part of the logo should face the rear of the helmet.The t-shirt logos that you created are great. As an equipment manager, I would defintely have those done. You can use CafeXpress (I think that is what it is called) to do some of the tees for retail.I really like you work here. It's a tremendous improvement from your earlier work. Please keep it up!Mahalo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted August 7, 2004 Author Share Posted August 7, 2004 thanks a lot, eqt. that helps. and thats a bet, ill come to you if i need any of those things mentioned. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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