Frenchie Posted January 5, 2022 Share Posted January 5, 2022 I like where you're going with this. 1 Quote @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vtgco Posted January 5, 2022 Share Posted January 5, 2022 Really think all of these updates are serious improvements! Certainly, they all feel much more professional to me. I really like how that first standalone one has a good diagonal connection between the E and M. If you go with the serif M, which is a really compelling direction, I think that's the way to go. That top middle one is a nice idea, but unfortunately I think it pretty much treads on the toes of the Brewers' BiG. I'm not feeling the top left one. The E & B are too big and feel way too geometric to pair with the serif M... They might work with the triangular M of the bottom left version. I don't actually think the design needs a B anywhere, but it could be done. Speaking of that bottom left version, that rounded geometric M 100% gives those '70s design vibes I was talking about earlier, and I really love that route for the Expos! It has some nice Alouettes synergy. I imagine that simplifying that E and its tail could do wonders. The bottom middle version needs some cleaning up, but feels quite promising and the most like an evolution true to the Expos brand... I think the ball and the "belly" of the B are too big proportionally to the rest of the logo, but this is a really solid idea! For all of these (except the BiG one), though, I'm not quite feeling the amount of overlap of the "eye" of the E on top of the M. The bottom two versions are close, but I think the eye wants to be a smaller, truer circle that's placed lower and further left (so that its midpoint is *at least* as far left as the left edge of the M, or possibly even entirely outside the M). All of these have their own super-excellent aspects, and you're making good, fast progress in lots of nice directions! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Indigo Posted January 6, 2022 Share Posted January 6, 2022 On 1/4/2022 at 3:25 PM, Sidney said: Thanks for the feedback! I've red and I agree with your critic! Here is a update to the previous version I'm trying to make sure the ball the e and m are working better. This is perfect. The concepts below this one make the ball look more like a "b", and don't flow as well, but this is the perfect moderization of the Expos. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 7, 2022 Author Share Posted January 7, 2022 Hi guys I was working on my previous versions trying to explore other direction and.... This happened I somehow manage to make a baseball hat with the e as the "e brim" and the M as the top with the ball in middle like a logo would. It's not perfect but this is really different from my previous ideas C & C are appreciated 3 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 7, 2022 Author Share Posted January 7, 2022 Just for the fun.... 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jbird669 Posted January 7, 2022 Share Posted January 7, 2022 I can get behind that Expos cap. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Indigo Posted January 7, 2022 Share Posted January 7, 2022 Definitely looks better (and more hat-like) with the person wearing it. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 8, 2022 Author Share Posted January 8, 2022 I really think I got something here, I've been aware of that possibility! Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 8, 2022 Author Share Posted January 8, 2022 6 hours ago, LA Fakers+ LA Snippers said: Definitely looks better (and more hat-like) with the person wearing it. I'll try to make it work without the mascot. 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchie Posted January 8, 2022 Share Posted January 8, 2022 On 1/6/2022 at 10:54 PM, Sidney said: Just for the fun.... Is that Steve Rogers? 2 Quote @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 8, 2022 Author Share Posted January 8, 2022 2 hours ago, Frenchie said: Is that Steve Rogers? Was supposed to be a 1970's player... I haven't done it on purpose ^^ Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 12, 2022 Author Share Posted January 12, 2022 Hi guys here is the clean version of the hat.... What do you think? 5 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 12, 2022 Author Share Posted January 12, 2022 Here are some color variations, which one work better you believe? 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 12, 2022 Author Share Posted January 12, 2022 Here is the mascot, the face is a planet because of the Universal exposition that took place in Montreal in 1967. I haven't found a name yet so id you got suggestions 3 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Indigo Posted January 12, 2022 Share Posted January 12, 2022 22 hours ago, Sidney said: Hi guys here is the clean version of the hat.... What do you think? I think the brighter colors look better. For a team like the Expos, staying away from standard navy & red and embracing brighter shades does them well (Also, I think the Mascot should be “Planet Expo”. Generic, but it works.) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 13, 2022 Author Share Posted January 13, 2022 @LA Fakers+ LA SnippersThanks for the feedback, I was thinking about Exo or Planet which is not fantastic ^^ I'll write them and see which one is getting votes : -Planet Expo -Exo -Planet 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VampyrRabbit Posted January 13, 2022 Share Posted January 13, 2022 How aboutnaming the mascot Expo Joe? For the colourway, A is the best. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 13, 2022 Author Share Posted January 13, 2022 8 hours ago, VampyrRabbitDesign said: How aboutnaming the mascot Expo Joe? For the colourway, A is the best. @VampyrRabbitDesignThanks for the feedback! Expo joe is pretty cool ! -Planet Expo -Exo -Planet -Expo Joe Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 26, 2022 Author Share Posted January 26, 2022 Hi guys, I'm back with my Raiders project. This is the latest version, what you think? 10 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VampyrRabbit Posted January 26, 2022 Share Posted January 26, 2022 Top notch, I like the aura of menace the slightly bowed head and shadowed eyes gives off. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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