DawgPacPBH

New Jersey Ninjas Concept

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Is he having a stroke? Experiencing a bout of indigestion? Suffering from acid reflux disease? :P

Seriously, the figure's posture is less than threatening or aggressive. I'd think that with a team name like Ninjas, those would be the traits - along with stealth - that you'd be trying to communicate through the figure's positioning.

I like the colors.

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Commenting so I can use this smiley: :ninja:

Not bad. I might use a more Asian font for the wordmark but otherwise not too bad.

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Is he having a stroke? Experiencing a bout of indigestion? Suffering from acid reflux disease? :P

Two words:Pepto Bismol! :D

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Ninjas in Jersey?

It looks like he's got a lump in the back of his pants--I relaize it's probably supposed to be a fabric fold or something like that--but that's what I see...

Good premise though...

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Is he having a stroke? Experiencing a bout of indigestion? Suffering from acid reflux disease? :P

I was seeing what DawgPacPBH was trying to convey until I read this comment. Now all I can picture is old Sanford & Son episodes with Fred faking a heart attack. Funny stuff.

And I agree with BiB. It needs to be more aggressive.

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aggressive enough for you?

Not quite... he's still rather stationary. Why not have him mid-flying-kick? Good artwork though!

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Ninjas in Jersey?

It looks like he's got a lump in the back of his pants--I relaize it's probably supposed to be a fabric fold or something like that--but that's what I see...

Good premise though...

and then again there were Ninjas in New Haven

NHNinjas.GIF

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... he's still rather stationary. Why not have him mid-flying-kick?

Yeah... in your second version of the primary logo, he looks more like a masked professional wrestler than a ninja.

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