DawgPacPBH Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 just fooling around, what do you guys think of it?EDIT - see below. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 Is he having a stroke? Experiencing a bout of indigestion? Suffering from acid reflux disease? Seriously, the figure's posture is less than threatening or aggressive. I'd think that with a team name like Ninjas, those would be the traits - along with stealth - that you'd be trying to communicate through the figure's positioning.I like the colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMMF Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 Commenting so I can use this smiley: Not bad. I might use a more Asian font for the wordmark but otherwise not too bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dilbert Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 Is he having a stroke? Experiencing a bout of indigestion? Suffering from acid reflux disease? Two words:Pepto Bismol! Signature intentionally left blank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 Ninjas in Jersey?It looks like he's got a lump in the back of his pants--I relaize it's probably supposed to be a fabric fold or something like that--but that's what I see...Good premise though... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 Is he having a stroke? Experiencing a bout of indigestion? Suffering from acid reflux disease? I was seeing what DawgPacPBH was trying to convey until I read this comment. Now all I can picture is old Sanford & Son episodes with Fred faking a heart attack. Funny stuff.And I agree with BiB. It needs to be more aggressive. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted November 5, 2004 Author Share Posted November 5, 2004 aggressive enough for you?version 2. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 cool, that's better--and no more lump in his pants... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 aggressive enough for you? Not quite... he's still rather stationary. Why not have him mid-flying-kick? Good artwork though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gary Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 Ninjas in Jersey?It looks like he's got a lump in the back of his pants--I relaize it's probably supposed to be a fabric fold or something like that--but that's what I see...Good premise though... and then again there were Ninjas in New Haven Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 ... he's still rather stationary. Why not have him mid-flying-kick? Yeah... in your second version of the primary logo, he looks more like a masked professional wrestler than a ninja. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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