Mings Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 Here ya go. Its a sneak peak for my team the Indianapolis Destroyers. I picked the name due to the USS Indianapolis, of which the memorial is located here in Indy. I went with 3 shades of silver/grey and blue for a navy theme so to speak. Right now its basically a wordmark, but I figured I would post to show the direction I plan on going in, and basically to stop workin on it for the night (the step back look later thing). So what do ya think?C&C and Ideas for the rest of the logo are more than welcome! Thanks guys and gals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 I think the beveled edges go a little overboard (fitting pun). The letters look like they have arrows on the edges, it gets a little distracting. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 yeah i think the grey i picked is too dark for it, ill have to lighten it up some Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 Make the bevel slightly more subtle and put "Indianapolis" somewhere besides under the logo. After that... *drooling* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 My problem is with the serifs. I think the bevel would look better if you either ditched the serifs, or kept them but changed the bevel style so that the serifs aren't beveled in (if that makes sense.) I think that would get rid of the triangles that people are seeing (and which were the first thing that jumped out at me when I looked at it.) "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 yeah on the serifs i believe the problem just might be the color of grey i chose for them. im gonna change that. also my s at the end looks off, im gonna fix that too. and vic dont drool too much save that for a stripper. yeah on indianapolis, im gonna move it. it was an idea that didnt work ou. it could if I made the tail much larger but I dont think I want to do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HurricaneDavid Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 Why not have a ship behind the wordmark? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 Why not have a ship behind the wordmark? Beacause this is just a sneak peak, it will eventually be there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gordie Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 There's no problem with the bevels on the serifs, Josh, except that you've colored them the same, with no regard to their orientation. They should be colored the same as other surfaces facing in the same direction if you want the lighting to look consistent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 There's no problem with the bevels on the serifs, Josh, except that you've colored them the same, with no regard to their orientation. They should be colored the same as other surfaces facing in the same direction if you want the lighting to look consistent. talkin about the ends right? if so that might take care of the triangle problem. thanks man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackjack76 Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 I'd make "Indianapolis" bigger...it's dwarfed in this logo.Not that I have anything against dwarfs/dwarves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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