mcrosby Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 i made this logo but think that it is missing some things that i can't put my finger onthe logo is for no specific reason, just practiceC&C PLEASE https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MHraven626 Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 To me the beak looks as if it was glued on to the birds face. If you could fix that and maybe add an accent color that would look nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coco Coolio Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 The beak needs to be on a better angle and like MHraven626 said the beak looks like it doesn't fit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 23, 2005 Author Share Posted December 23, 2005 I used this as inspiration and i want to keep it somewhat realistic https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 23, 2005 Author Share Posted December 23, 2005 i quickly added an accent of orange, tried to make the beak fit in, and angled the beak, not the easiest on MS paint https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MHraven626 Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 Its looking better mcrosby keep it up. Do you have a specific sport for this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 no specific sport, just a concept that i am making to hone any skill i may have, if anyone wants to take a stab at the logo they are welcome to https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 what do you guys think of an orange beak instead of grey https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCBoy Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 Looks good crosby, the orange accent makes the logo some much better, more interesting and much more colourful as well. You're original didn't have very much colour which made it boring, but this logo is well on its way. The beak looks better with orange, to answer you're question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 I GOT IT! The Beak is upside down! try it the other way! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 anyone have an idea for an alternate logo https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 i'v got a name and script but i can't think of a way to do an alternate https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 how does a webbed foot or maybe a silhouette of the bird sound for an alt. I tried both and i am not having luck with making them match the current logo https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logodawg Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 I GOT IT! The Beak is upside down! try it the other way! Great Scott! You're right! I once had a car but I crashed it. I once had a guitar but I smashed it. I once, wait where am I going with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 here is a rough alternate https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 C&C please https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 I think it looks great New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 thanks sideshowbob https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TNT44 Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 I GOT IT! The Beak is upside down! try it the other way! He's right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 25, 2005 Author Share Posted December 25, 2005 i have decided to use the Pacific Coast University Albatross for my UOC entry https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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