Robert89 Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 What do you guys think?C&C Appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bucskick20 Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 Looks good, u should make an away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 Other than the colors and logo, it just doesn't say Florida State. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bhambruiser Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 not sure about the number font. the sparkle is a bit too much IMO. other than that- it is a good start Millican StudiosMillican Studios Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 Yes, the sparkles are a bit much. But a solid and good looking set of unis.Would a "seminole spear" like on the football helmets, going thru the #s be a bit much?Great job!!  Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021     St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL)  2023 Champions   Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 Can't say I am behind this. At all.Maroon numbers on maroon jersey looks really poor. No contrast. Try gold or white numbers.Rounded, italicized numbers with upright, serifed lettering font. Again, bad idea.Logo beneath the collar, in the front? Why? The school's name is right beneath it. This doesn't look like the Nike Elite jerseys where there's a small logo in the V of the V-neck. This looks like a bad ripoff.Contrast coloring in the front of the crotch only? Looks like someone peed themselves.Nope... not at all. Sorry. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robert89 Posted January 20, 2006 Author Share Posted January 20, 2006 How about these? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bucskick20 Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 I think these numbers go with the jerseys a lot more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michigan Dave Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 It looks like a Colosseum jersey, a bad knock off. Good effort, I'm just not feeling it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sscrunner06 Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 The spear on the shorts works really well, but the "Florida State" is a little small. Maybe put Florida above the numbers, State below the numbers, and then make the numbers a little smaller. Keep working with it, I think this could eventually work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 Shorts are much much better (though the gold panels at the crotch are still distracting - and do you want the viewers' eyes directed to dude crotch?) with the spear.Jerseys are better, but the light-colored spear running behind the light-outlined-in-light numbers makes for poor legibility. I like the previously-mentioned idea of putting "FLORIDA" above the numbers and "STATE" below. Or try just "FSU" like you have on the shorts. Either way, as it is now, your lettering will be lost in the players' armpits.Good progress, though... "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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