nwtrailtrekker Posted October 29, 2006 Share Posted October 29, 2006 Hey there,So i decided for my 2000th post here on the boards i would draw up a little design for your eyes to feast upon, and I'd love your honest comments and criticism.The Kitsap Bluejackets are a local College Level Baseball team here in town, here is their current look:Now, the logo for the Bluejackets features a "yellow jacket" made blue. This disturbs me, as the true meaning to "Bluejacket" is someone who is in the navy (and we full of them here in town). So...I designed my logo as a sailor's wheel, with a baseball, and found a cool wordmark to go with.I tried to keep the jersey fairly tame, to keep a classic look. Designed in MS Paint only.Without further ado, my take on the Kitsap Bluejackets:Once again, any C&C would be greatly appreciatedAnd thanks to all who have put up with me for 2000 posts! THANKS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted October 29, 2006 Share Posted October 29, 2006 I really like it, but I think you should put Blue jackets on the same line and kitsap on another line on the jerseys, when i looked at it i thought the town was kitsap blue then jackets. I like the logo to, good job New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted October 29, 2006 Author Share Posted October 29, 2006 I really like it, but I think you should put Blue jackets on the same line and kitsap on another line on the jerseys, when i looked at it i thought the town was kitsap blue then jackets. I like the logo to, good jobi would but the name "Bluejackets" is waaayyy too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted October 29, 2006 Share Posted October 29, 2006 I agree with sideshowbob about the name on the jersey. Perhaps you should just have "Kitsap" on the road jersey and "Bluejackets" on the home. If you are really concerned about length have "blue" on top and "jackets" on the bottom, but then it's not so confusing. Or maybe just use "Jackets." That would work if that's a name used by the fans. Similar to "Rays" for the Devil Rays.I'd change the "K" on the cap to white so it's easier to see. The wheel is good, but I'm not "wow-ed" by it. Solid concept overall. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted October 29, 2006 Author Share Posted October 29, 2006 heres version 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uniguy22 Posted October 29, 2006 Share Posted October 29, 2006 Version 2 is much better. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted October 29, 2006 Share Posted October 29, 2006 Yes, much better. The home looks much better. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 the jerseys on the second version are much better, but I think the main logo from the 1st version is better New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted October 31, 2006 Author Share Posted October 31, 2006 the jerseys on the second version are much better, but I think the main logo from the 1st version is better...i didnt change the logos... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kc51design Posted October 31, 2006 Share Posted October 31, 2006 the team name has Blue in it, but color scheme doesn't have blue whatsoever?! lockerroom51 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bterreson Posted October 31, 2006 Share Posted October 31, 2006 when i see this, i think "Japanese Baseball".. not that its a bad thing, its just what i first think. Tumblr. Twitter. Flickr. Facebook. Last.Fm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted October 31, 2006 Share Posted October 31, 2006 Are they seriously so cheap that they cant even get a damn yellow K embroidered on their hats? On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discrim Posted October 31, 2006 Share Posted October 31, 2006 that's what I was thinkin, bucfan. the first set reminded me of Japanese baseball...like a lot of folks used to think the Nippon Ham Fighters' nickname was "Ham Fighters" (it's simply Fighters, Nippon Ham is their owner), I'd almost be inclined to think this team was the "Kitsap Blue" Jackets and then wonder what the hell the company does cus at least Nippon Ham's straightforward...they're in Nippon (aka Japan) and make ham. seriously, they can't afford a K on the hats? A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted November 2, 2006 Author Share Posted November 2, 2006 bump?the team name has Blue in it, but color scheme doesn't have blue whatsoever?!the main color is blue. dude. adjust your screen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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