HarperK Posted May 11, 2007 Share Posted May 11, 2007 I did a couple small tweaks (if you don't mind, would have been much harder to explain in words alone)-Eyes (tryed to make them look a lil angry by slightly changing the shape)-Nose(a little more subtle, but obvious what i did)Hope it helps... ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted May 11, 2007 Author Share Posted May 11, 2007 That eye thing you did I think is perfect, exactly what it needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted May 13, 2007 Author Share Posted May 13, 2007 bump the update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jOkeR Posted May 13, 2007 Share Posted May 13, 2007 That looks awesome. I still think making the nose silver would be a good idea though. Lebanon Warrior Football Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted May 13, 2007 Share Posted May 13, 2007 That looks awesome. I still think making the nose silver would be a good idea though.it does look good...no, great. especially considering the first versionALTHOUGH i will say i don't like the word mark much at all...seems really uninspired. the actual logo itself though...A+ ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CFSize24 Posted May 13, 2007 Share Posted May 13, 2007 One thing you may want to try is to eliminate the red in the right upper lip area. This sort of completes the shaded area on the right side of the face. Formula GPCenterField 22 pts #7 Coca-Cola Giancarlo Fisichella 4pts#8 Coca-Cola Lewis Hamilton 18ptsTRACCenterField Motorsports#5 Sony Kyle Busch#8 Gatorade Kurt Busch#9 Sirius David Ragan/Ricky Rudd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted May 15, 2007 Author Share Posted May 15, 2007 Bump...I cant be done, so get C&Cing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebels Baseball Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 That eye thing you did I think is perfect, exactly what it needed.This is the best one, it looks amazing. What sports would these logos be used for, because it would be nice to see how you could make this mascot sports specific. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 5, 2007 Author Share Posted June 5, 2007 Heres an update....Im really interested in C&C on the mouth area...and anything else really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted June 5, 2007 Share Posted June 5, 2007 the bottom part of the jaw needs to move way back [in space]. i don't think you need the 'mustache lines.' you need to refine the curves in some of your lines as they tend took sloppy and unrefined at times. the extra crimson line in the nose is not needed and will all but disappear at small scale. the quality of the black linework should probably be bolder, as the current black linework on and around the face will be very delicate when this is reduced to a small size. you might make it interesting if you varied the line weight of the black line that surrounds the upper left ear and around the bottom of the chin; it's pretty equal in thickness around those parts. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted June 5, 2007 Share Posted June 5, 2007 i don't know how to say it, but something on the right side of the face is making this logo look oddly distorted...like it's been warped or something - not sure how to fix it because i can't put my finger on the exact cause, but it's there...sorry for the vague c&c...i'll keep looking at this and see if i can find out WHY i think it looks distorted... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 5, 2007 Author Share Posted June 5, 2007 Updated from the most recent replies..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VC// Posted June 5, 2007 Share Posted June 5, 2007 I like the whiskers in this one LETS GO PENGUINS! 5x Stanley Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 5, 2007 Author Share Posted June 5, 2007 Again...Once more.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 5, 2007 Author Share Posted June 5, 2007 UpdateI think this is pretty much dead. I cant beat it anymore....maybe some touch ups here and there, but otherwise I think the basic final product is here.Im going to get to work on simplifying the wordmark.I plan on dropping this off at the superintendents office sometime later this month when Im in town. Im donating it from my class by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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