WJMorris3 Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 The WLAF's Atlantic City Legion have come up with their identity for the 2008 season.First off, much thanks to PISTONSthenextDYNASTY for designing the logo, wordmark, and uniforms.Logo and Wordmark:Uniforms:The helmets on those uniforms are incorrect though, they would be using the following helmet:I took it on myself, though, to come up with the field design. It's not completely finished, but it's located here (please click to see the full design).Comments and critiques welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
10th Squad Captain Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Overall an A- design, it would be an A+ design if a white outline was added to the home uni numbers and a gold outline was on the road unis, everything else is sharp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 I love the field design - I haven't seen one done in this format before - 3D tilted. Very nice - I like the gold/tan turf. Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WJMorris3 Posted December 1, 2007 Author Share Posted December 1, 2007 I love the field design - I haven't seen one done in this format before - 3D tilted. Very nice - I like the gold/tan turf.Thank you. For the record, I did the field in Google SketchUp, which is a 3D building program. The tan field should evoke thoughts of the sand that would have been found on the floor of the Flavian Amphitheatre. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trademarked15 Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 i love that helmet design, overall very good concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koizim Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 I understand what you're trying to do with the helmet design, but to me it ends up looking like a furrowed brow in the front and a "hot dog neck" in the back. Perhaps if you made the helmet a little bit more bronze, it would look less like flesh. Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gingerbreadmann Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 I <3 that Wordmark!The only things I dislike are the jersey piping, the tan field I am not so sure about, and the brown lines (although in the logo), I do not think will work on a (football) helmet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WJMorris3 Posted December 2, 2007 Author Share Posted December 2, 2007 Just giving this a bump... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishheatcats Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 I love the roman numerals on the field, that's awesome! Also the helmet is a cool idea, but not sure if it would work on an actual helmet. Flight 19 ::: Fort Lauderdale Soccer Supporters ::: DEFEND THE FORT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJM Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 Love the field and roman numerals. Great work. (MLF) Chicago Cannons, (IHA) Phoenix Firebirds - 2021 Xtreme Cup Champions (WAFL) Phoenix Federals - WAFL World Bowl XII Champions (Defunct) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 I love everything about this set. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 I like everything but the helmet. I like the idea, but it just doesn't look good here. Could be one of those things where it looks good on an actual helmet, I dunno. I LOVE the field design though. The roman numerals are a great touch. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 For fun, you ought to try putting an armor/skirt design on the pants, like what the actual Roman soldiers wore. And I saw someone else incorporate a sword shape in their design somewhere for their ancient military motif (Conquistadors, maybe?) and it looked pretty cool. Maybe down the sides of the jersey. But I'm just looking for fun alternatives. I wouldn't change a thing about this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 I think the face could be reworked to look somewhat bolder. The wordmark screams 70's acid frenzy-typography though. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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