Starchild Posted February 15, 2004 Share Posted February 15, 2004 Well, at last, I've finally decided to post on the same board as a lot of my inspirations... Not trying to brown nose, but as a a guy who's relatively new to graphic design and jersey/logo design (nearing 2 years now), I have to give props to all the work you've done... definitely keeps my interests up and makes me want to continue to grow with graphic design.Anyway, just some background so everyone knows where I'm coming from... I do basically all my work in photoshop (I've just started using Illustrator again, I just prefer Photoshop) so that's why many of my lines and curves and such aren't crisp. In addition, I've tried focusing more on the jersey design rather than the logo designs.... although in certain cases I feel I've done a good job. Last but not least, do not treat these as finished products... these are more like fancy sketches... also, they are not complete overhauls, but rather a "redesigning" of sorts as the title states.Anyway, enough with this stuff, here are the concepts, all feedback is appreciated (be it negative or positive) so please, critique me!Boston Celtics HomeNew York Knicks HomeNew York Knicks RoadNew York Knicks LogoLA Lakers HomeLA Lakers RoadOrlando Magic HomeOrlando Magic RoadOrlando Magic LogoDetroit Pistons HomeDetroit Pistons LogoBrooklyn Nets Road (simple change)Thanx a lot... I look forward to all the critiques I get. "The true New Yorker secretly believes that anyone living anywhere else has got to be, in some sense, kidding." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted February 15, 2004 Share Posted February 15, 2004 i thoroughly enjoyed them all. the magic road was Ok, but i prefer the blue over black Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ezreiter3 Posted February 15, 2004 Share Posted February 15, 2004 Very nice......love the Knicks sets.Travis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLChandler Posted February 15, 2004 Share Posted February 15, 2004 That is some quality work right there. The only thing is I think Lakers will stick to basic uniforms because they seem to have been serving them well. But KILLER concepts man, thouroghly enjoyed them all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hbomb90 Posted February 15, 2004 Share Posted February 15, 2004 Good stuff. I think thats a really nice nemplate too, it's smooth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJTank Posted February 15, 2004 Share Posted February 15, 2004 Not bad at all. The designs on the unis is very good, as is the Knicks logo. However I am not a fan of the fonts you chose for teh wrodmarks. I think if you chose better fonts it would be perfect. www.sportsecyclopedia.com For the best in sports history go to the Sports E-Cyclopedia at http://www.sportsecyclopedia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted February 15, 2004 Share Posted February 15, 2004 However I am not a fan of the fonts you chose for teh wrodmarks. I think if you chose better fonts it would be perfect.It'd be fine if you used that font for one of them, but yeah, some variety would help.Welcome here Starchild.You've done a fine job on most of these. The production quality is quite high considering your using raster.The logo designs are sharp, although I think the Knicks logo would benefit from some clarity... I'd say drop the whole 'buildings' motif and go with the Statue of Liberty.I really liked the Pistons logo, combination of the old and new. Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waffles Posted February 16, 2004 Share Posted February 16, 2004 Finally, you've made it to the board...great stuff, as usual, Jon.(StarChild and I go wayyyy back) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted February 16, 2004 Share Posted February 16, 2004 I am not an NBA fan, but your unis & logos are great. I like the font change for the Lakers and Celtics. Nice logos - keep up the good work. Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted February 18, 2004 Share Posted February 18, 2004 These jerseys are beautifulBoston- Made a great first impression. A good update of what they have.New York- I really sharp sleek design. The logo is a little busy, but not bad. I'd reccomend dropping the silver. Also, don't forget black in the white jerseys, and white in the blue jersey.Los Angeles L- I know it's a throwback, but I don't like the dropshadowed numbers. The side stripe on the jersey gets too wide at the bottom and won't match the shorts, either. It's not bad, but I think I'd take what they have over this.Orlando- I absolutely love these. This is the perfect combination of all the jerseys they have ever had. Actually, make that almost perfect. I'd like to see the black as an alt, and a blue jersey as the regular road.Detroit- Very, very sharp, but not really better than what they currently have. Except maybe the logo, I like that.Brooklyn- You said simple yourself, so there's not much I can say. JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikeb7 Posted February 18, 2004 Share Posted February 18, 2004 I love the knicks jerseys but I dig their current logo more!good stuff overall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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