Snowcap30 Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 hey guys...havent done one in a while and i was bored so here we go. heres a concept i made for the nashville predators. YES, I USED A VARIATION OF THE CHECH REPUBLIC JERSEY.UPDATEi updated the design. darkened the grey and suchORIGINALUPDATEcomments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 the grey seems like dirty white to me (maybe its my monitor)...it needs to be darker imo.ive always loved that logo tho, so nice use of it here. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 the grey seems like dirty white to me (maybe its my monitor)...it needs to be darker imo.ive always loved that logo tho, so nice use of it here.I think he was going for the light silver found in the face of the logo. Too light for me, though. I would say darken the grey, and switch the blue and yellow on the top shoulder yoke. Too much yellow, I think. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn89 Posted May 23, 2008 Share Posted May 23, 2008 It's a good start, but it seems too plain. The gray/silver should be a bit darker, and the design itself needs at least another element to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted May 23, 2008 Share Posted May 23, 2008 Besides darkening the gray, you should also make the blue curves thinner. The arms also need some sort of stripping pattern for it to look completed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Milo Meningocele Posted May 23, 2008 Share Posted May 23, 2008 I think it still needs a darker color incorporated, to minimize Pittsburgh comparisons as much as possible. Not only is it predominantly black and gold, but the triangle is a further reminder of the Penguins for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsM29 Posted May 23, 2008 Share Posted May 23, 2008 I think that those added stripes might get lost in the players gloves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted May 24, 2008 Share Posted May 24, 2008 I believe it would work better if there was more black on the jersey, not just black piping. At least, that's what I was expecting when you said you would update it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendan Posted May 24, 2008 Share Posted May 24, 2008 The logo is great, I've always liked it and you did a nice job of cleaning it up. That said, the jerseys are very bland and dont fit the logo, try adding a little more yellow and some stipping to the bottom of the jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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