Atomic Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 I was thinking of changing my fantasy baseball team (outside of the boards) and came up with this. The name "Miracle" refers to the old hotel called the Dunes which was once called the miracle in the desert. The stars I tried to make similar to those that appeared at the Stardust hotel back in the day and the colors are just something I felt associated with the term "miracle". C&C appreciated.So here's the logo sheet:..and here are the uniforms:...and yes, I am aware that the interior of the '9' is missing it's striping. I can't seem to have the png translate to photobuckt with it for some reason, so if anybody has any tips to remedy that, I'd greatly appreciate it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJSpeedy Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 I don't think the wordmark works on the uniform with it being white, it's just very hard to see.I would recommend reversing the colors on the wordmark - it'll show up MUCH better on the home uniform, for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boshalladay Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 The star on the baseball kinda makes it look like a basketball. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 Good start, but it's impossible to see the scripts on the jerseys. Flip the colors. Reminds me a lot of the Magic erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltravisjr Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 Flip-flop the fill/outline schemes of the lettering and the stars (i.e. make the lettering dark and stars light) and you will have pure beauty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB06 Posted December 20, 2008 Share Posted December 20, 2008 I'd go a step further and lose the stars completely on the jerseys. They clutter up the scripts. Sodboy13 said: As you watch more basketball, you will learn to appreciate the difference between "defense" and "couldn't find the rim with a pair of bloodhounds and a Garmin." meet the new page, not the same as the old page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfect Zero Posted December 20, 2008 Share Posted December 20, 2008 If I were watching a game on TV, I wouldn't be able to tell your teams name with the stars on the jersey. I agree with losing them, and making the wordmark brighter. I do say though, this is better than the baseball team they have now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 20, 2008 Share Posted December 20, 2008 The star on the baseball kinda makes it look like a basketball.Exactly what I thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 I agree, I temporarily forgot that it was a baseball concept and not a basketball one. This would only work with the star over the ball like that if you put seem stiching on the baseball so there is absolutely no confusion because now it looks exactly like a basketball. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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