Ballinology Posted April 19, 2009 Share Posted April 19, 2009 I know I could have done better with this, but I got lazy at the end and just wanted to finish it. I do indeed like the way the uniforms turned out. So, here it is: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted April 19, 2009 Share Posted April 19, 2009 Good start, especially for your first try. Problems I see:-Side panels don't match up at all. Neither does the piping that surrounds them.-On the jersey side panel, it creates an arrow downwards, while on the pants it is just a diagonal slash.-Front numbers need to be a little bigger, and the back numbers need to be much bigger.-The pointless piping near the name on back should probably be eliminated. It's pretty distracting.-The chest piping that comes down from the collar has a weird color switch to it. On the road it is the same color as the lower side panel. But on the home it is the same color as the UPPER side panel. That just bothers me. The home piping should probably be white.Nice, clean concept though. If you make some edits it could be really great! Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ballinology Posted April 19, 2009 Author Share Posted April 19, 2009 Yeah, I see what your saying about the stripes. Ah, now that you mentioned all that it looks completely terrible lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy! Posted April 19, 2009 Share Posted April 19, 2009 Not bad. Personally, I'd make the logo on the back and the wordmark on the front smaller, make the numbers on the back a little larger, and throw some sleeve numbers on there.What would it look like if the home jersey color matched the helmet? "I secretly hope people like that hydroplane into a wall." - Dennis "Big Sexy" Ittner POTD - 7/3/14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted April 19, 2009 Share Posted April 19, 2009 Side-panel panel colors on the jerseys need to be reversed, so the lighter blue is at the bottom of both - otherwise you can't have mix-and-match pants. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oddball Posted April 20, 2009 Share Posted April 20, 2009 Let me go ahead and say this, and it's something that bugs me to no end. I don't care how many concepts you've done, don't ever turn out a sloppy concept or better yet title it, "First Concept" or something to that effect. Why? You lose so many viewers who could help you or encourage you, because we've seen so many crappy concepts that when we see "First Concept" we all kind of cringe expecting the worst. The funny thing is, every first concept I've dared to look at has been pretty good. You're selling yourself short when you mention that. It's honestly useless information. Just tell us what you're working on and what kind of help on the project you're looking for. I like to know background of why you chose it and why you're working it in the direction or colors you are. Oh yeah and again don't sell yourself short with, "I could've done better" or " I got lazy". It may be true, but we don't need to know that. Let us know the process you went through, etc., but don't tell us you got lazy. You did an excellent job here, don't sell yourself short. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ballinology Posted April 20, 2009 Author Share Posted April 20, 2009 Let me go ahead and say this, and it's something that bugs me to no end. I don't care how many concepts you've done, don't ever turn out a sloppy concept or better yet title it, "First Concept" or something to that effect. Why? You lose so many viewers who could help you or encourage you, because we've seen so many crappy concepts that when we see "First Concept" we all kind of cringe expecting the worst. The funny thing is, every first concept I've dared to look at has been pretty good. You're selling yourself short when you mention that. It's honestly useless information. Just tell us what you're working on and what kind of help on the project you're looking for. I like to know background of why you chose it and why you're working it in the direction or colors you are. Oh yeah and again don't sell yourself short with, "I could've done better" or " I got lazy". It may be true, but we don't need to know that. Let us know the process you went through, etc., but don't tell us you got lazy. You did an excellent job here, don't sell yourself short.Thanks I appreciate the comment and I agree completely. I'll keep that in mind when I post another concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fyrwulf Posted April 20, 2009 Share Posted April 20, 2009 If you do what elliot suggested you probably have the classiest set of piping-clad unis I've ever seen. I mean, even with the faults your set has it's very pleasing to the eye. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted April 20, 2009 Share Posted April 20, 2009 Elliot has you covered, but I'll just add that the "armpit striping" (for lack of a better term) looks way too much like Seattle's division rivals in Arizona. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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