Blitz Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Hi All,So with the new affiliation (hopefully a long one!!!), it seems quite likely that the Bisons will rebrand once again - was thinking it would be cool to match the logo styling the Jays use currently.Drew this up yesterday, but I cant decide whether I actually like it/ what it needs to be better/ etc... and would love some input from the community on how to proceed (or whether this is a bad idea all together and I should ditch it!!!)thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrySmalls Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 It's a good start; however, it took me a second or two to realize that it was a bison. My eyes honed in on the white (negative) space within the animal's head, so I recommend tweaking the snout and cheek on the creature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 I'd stretch the face out a little so you can make it look more like a buffalo. Right now it looks like a calf with a mullet. I like that you're trying to have him look over a shoulder though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 ...what Mindless and MJ said.You're off to a good start.It's the dark blue shape that needs tweaking...A little more aggressive-looking? *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDixonDesign Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 A little cleaning up, and you've got a solid start. Little things that most seasoned designers would notice like:- Outline around star portion is cut off in negative space.- Smoothness of lines around Head and inner face white space.- The baseball stitches are a lost element due to the size of the head of the Bison.Great start, keep tweaking, keep building the concept, and you've got a solid logo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New_Member Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Why the star? How about an electric bolt instead? Or no symbol to replace the maple leaf and just leave the area blank, as the Dunedin Blue Jays do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pianoknight Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 I had to Google "Buffalo Bisons" to realize it was a farm team baseball club.Kind of looks like the Buffalo Bills had a bastard child with the Toronto Blue Jays. 5th in NAT. TITLES | 2nd in CONF. TITLES | 5th in HEISMAN | 7th in DRAFTS | 8th in ALL-AMER | 7th in WINS | 4th in BOWLS | 1st in SELLOUTS | 1st GAMEDAY SIGN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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