iamLillard Posted May 1, 2013 Share Posted May 1, 2013 Indiana Pacers:Hello guys here is a concept for the Pacers I realy dont like their curent logo so I made this. Pls comment , rate, tell me what u think... all comments will be taken as a positive critic, so tell me realy what u think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TShaw528 Posted May 2, 2013 Share Posted May 2, 2013 It's well done production wise, but I can't say I care for the logo.Lotta empty yellow space, I get it's a P/Basketball, but it's kinda plain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted May 2, 2013 Share Posted May 2, 2013 It is a little too abstract to work as an actual NBA logo. I also would like to see it over a colored background to see how it works because I don't think it would work over any color other than white.Is the yellow suppose to form a P? The bottom leg of the P should be longer. It's a nice attempt to make the P and basketball lines mix, but the execution is not there. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iamLillard Posted May 2, 2013 Author Share Posted May 2, 2013 Ok guys, thanx for the positive commnts I currently work on it, so till i resolve that here is another logo requested my a friend here in forum for a fantasy basketball team: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panthers_2012 Posted May 2, 2013 Share Posted May 2, 2013 Good idea you have going here. The thing that I didn't like is how big the moon is. I understand what you are trying to do and it looks good, maybe just shrink the moon down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 2, 2013 Share Posted May 2, 2013 Pacers: Place the logo on a different coloured background to indicate what is negative space in the logo and what is background. I get what you're trying to do with the P but it's too abstract right now--longer leg, smaller head, and it will look more like a P.Wolves: The moon is too detailed. Always consider what can be rendered in embroidery thread, which is only so thin. Always consider what the logo will look like shrunken down. When you substituted black with white in the logo, all sense of a wolf disappears and it just looks like random abstract shapes. Keep the black all the time, both for cohesion and consistency. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigRed618 Posted May 3, 2013 Share Posted May 3, 2013 Pacers: How about using a whole basketball and putting the P inside that?Wolves: Agreed with panthers. That moon is too big or the wolf is too small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cjt27 Posted May 9, 2013 Share Posted May 9, 2013 Take the yellow and extend the "P" and then wrap it around to complete the ball. I like it though, You could also go away from the original P and basketball and think in terms of the origins of the name and harness racing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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