AAO Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 With all this going on with the Suns, I thought I'd try to solve the problem with a different but familiar route.Edit: Unis up Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 Wow, these are all fantastic. I think the ones in the third row are the best. I love how you worked the phoenix into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buckeye Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 The ones in the 3rd row nailed it. All of these, however, are fantastic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 Can you keep concepting until these boards go down? Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted July 16, 2013 Author Share Posted July 16, 2013 Thanks for the feedback all. Here are some uniform ideas. I want the Phoenix wordmark to work with the sunburst, but just not sure how its coming along. The sleeved uni..is a test. I would like to see the sunburst to return to the jersey, but done right this time. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceHawk447 Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 Ian, I think the fourth row is best, especially the primaries with the purple base and the negative-space "SUNS" ambigram.As for uniforms...I'd suggest a little experiment; move the number above the tail of the sunburst, with the wordmark just below the sunburst. Overall, Ian, I'd say this stuff is SOLID. [447] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted July 16, 2013 Author Share Posted July 16, 2013 ^ Thanks, I tried putting the wordmark below the sunburst and it was not working. I do however have another update. Bringing a bit more dimension to the sunburst and adding a desert mountain scene. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buckeye Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 The bottom left logo, it just feels...right. Jersey's are perfect, and yet again, someone on these boards out did the "professional" product. Ian, you nailed it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Houston Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 Good work, though I'm not a huge fan of the how the letter S joins the rest of the text in the wordmark. The homage to the 90's font is cool, but I think it'd look better separated. Also, because that's the effect you're going for, the text makes the front of the jerseys look unbalanced and tilted heavier to the right. I think the fourth row down from the first set you posted at the very top is the most well balanced and could tinkered with to make a really great set. Keep it going. "And then I remember to relax, and stop trying to hold on to it, and then it flows through me like rain and I can't feel anything but gratitude for every single moment of my stupid little life... You have no idea what I'm talking about, I'm sure. But don't worry... you will someday." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 This is really great work! I'm not a fan of the sleeved jerseys in basketball, but you did a good job anyways! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 from your original post, i think the logos in the 3rd, 4th and 5th rows are the best. the ones with the long, thin sun rays are not very appealing to me, the sun rays are actually a bit annoying and im sure it would be a pain to reproduce at small sizes and in embroidery. they also have such a different aesthetic compared to the others that the lack of consistency is too much. stick with rows 3 - 5, they look more like a family of logos. GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elijah Summerdrum Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 I can tell you worked hard on this, thats a good thing. I like them all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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