GameCock82 Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 here are the concepts I have made for geoff der Idiot, I spent a lot of time on these and would like comments and suggestions. Yipee Its working now, photobucket is up! here are my final changes, got rid of the old lookin pilot and changed the fighter pilot. Thanks for the help, whchoclte, GMS, and syphi. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geoff Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 *reads from card with no emotion* Oh, wow. That is awesome [insert name errr Gamecock82. I just love them.But, seriously, those are great. Thankl you bery much Athletic Director: KTU Blue Grassers Football Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 30, 2004 Author Share Posted June 30, 2004 you are very welcome -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 30, 2004 Author Share Posted June 30, 2004 by the way im not liking my fighter pilot word mark as much as i do with the red baron looking one, well at least that is my opinion -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 ...and since it's a pain to look under properties, and since Angelfire no longer allows remote linking...http://www.angelfire.com/art2/gamecock/ima...ogopackage2.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 ...and since it's a pain to look under properties, and since Angelfire no longer allows remote linking...http://www.angelfire.com/art2/gamecock/ima...ogopackage2.gif Is that what explains all of these pictures that wont show up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 30, 2004 Author Share Posted June 30, 2004 hopefully photobucket is up soon so I can show them. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whchoclte Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Like the package, Great colors.Do have some comments as always. Why the two airmen. You are losing the concentrated identity by having two. Maybe if you stick with the fighter jet you can do a A in smoke like in an air show etc.Also the shadow on the man bottom right is too stright. Add soem highlights might spruce it up.Great job otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 30, 2004 Author Share Posted June 30, 2004 if you havent noticed i have made changes. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 much better on the fighter pilot this time, the jet looks good too, keep up the good work. you'll continue to get better with each one GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Looking better and better all the time.I'd remove the oval frame around the pilot logo, and cut down on the amount of upper body that's showing. I'd keep his tag visible, as well as the tops of his armpits. I don't think they have traditional plane steering wheels in fighter planes anymore, and a control stick might look dumb, so if you feel like it, try these suggestions, and then we can see where we should go from there.For the plane, try sweeping the wings back a little more. Also, have them taper a little more the further away from the body they get.Is the "V" supposed to be a logo? I'd fuggedaboudit. It's too simple, and looks more like a "V" than any airplane reference. Cool idea, but IMO it doesn't work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geoff Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Eh? Athletic Director: KTU Blue Grassers Football Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 30, 2004 Author Share Posted June 30, 2004 Geoff, sorry man but if you want to keep your logos like that its fine with me but im fixing everything up, to make it fantstico. If you need anything just give me a shout.I changed the rank to that, that is airman rank, and fixed the wings like syphi wanted so, any more suggestions will be accepted. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Braden Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Love the primary and secondary logos, but I'm sorry, I'm not feeling the woodmark at all.I think it all starts with the font choice, and that Star Wars font IMO has gotta go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted July 1, 2004 Author Share Posted July 1, 2004 anyone like the fonts better in these ones. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Proportionally, the AIRMEN has to be quite a bit bigger than the pilot. Also, it'd be cool if it would have some sort of distortion that bulges it inward, kinda like a bow-tie, so that it cradles the pilot a little more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted July 1, 2004 Author Share Posted July 1, 2004 BUMP -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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