Jordy_shore Posted May 24, 2014 Share Posted May 24, 2014 http://i1372.photobucket.com/albums/ag336/Jordyshore23/imagejpg2_zps913f035d.jpghttp://i1372.photobucket.com/albums/ag336/Jordyshore23/imagejpg2_zpse9401eaa.jpgThere is the knicks alternate logo and the new logo Baby did you fall from heavenBecause your face looks pretty screwed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 24, 2014 Share Posted May 24, 2014 I like...on the first one, maybe put "knicks" somewhere??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted May 24, 2014 Share Posted May 24, 2014 second one, the whole logo needs cleaning up, the outlines in the basketball aren't even for starters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted May 24, 2014 Share Posted May 24, 2014 That second logo is nothing but the current logo with the background removed... "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted May 24, 2014 Share Posted May 24, 2014 Why would you get rid of the triangle in the main logo, but have one in the secondary? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordy_shore Posted May 25, 2014 Author Share Posted May 25, 2014 So back to the drawing board with the main logo Baby did you fall from heavenBecause your face looks pretty screwed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 And alternate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 And alternateI actually like the alternate, the only thing that needs is to be cleaned up a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordy_shore Posted May 25, 2014 Author Share Posted May 25, 2014 Clean up the alternate will do I'm just remaking a logo the creator of the knicks logo had as a concept Baby did you fall from heavenBecause your face looks pretty screwed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(probably)notabandwagonfan Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Not at all creative here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Not that I'm the only person to ever render the Empire State Building, but the composition of your "logo" (ESB in a triangle) looks a lot like the partial logo that I made a few months ago....... DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Not that I'm the only person to ever render the Empire State Building, but the composition of your "logo" (ESB in a triangle) looks a lot like the partial logo that I made a few months ago.......Meh, I think his is different enough. Not in a good different though. Like everyone else said it needs to be touched up and cleaned up a lot. Right now it's a very line detail of the Empire state building when it should be a sports logo. Bold, and direct. Too many lines in yours Jody. I'm not saying to copy Jaha's but he did a great job of showing how you portray a building in a sports logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordy_shore Posted May 25, 2014 Author Share Posted May 25, 2014 So less lines and make it cleaner to make it look like a logi Baby did you fall from heavenBecause your face looks pretty screwed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordy_shore Posted May 25, 2014 Author Share Posted May 25, 2014 Ok here is the new alternate with less lines http://i1372.photobucket.com/albums/ag336/Jordyshore23/imagejpg1_zps768fb156.jpg Baby did you fall from heavenBecause your face looks pretty screwed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Ok here is the new alternate with less lines http://i1372.photobucket.com/albums/ag336/Jordyshore23/imagejpg1_zps768fb156.jpgSo you end up scraping your alternate and just steal a logo that was posted earlier? Sheesh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Ok here is the new alternate with less lines http://i1372.photobucket.com/albums/ag336/Jordyshore23/imagejpg1_zps768fb156.jpgSo you end up scraping your alternate and just steal a logo that was posted earlier? Sheesh...See. you did...a little better with it. But like he said, that's insanely close to Jaha's. And by insanely close I mean it almost looks like the same image but less quality. Look at other logos, such as animals or ones with objects in them. They don't have so much detail inside or on the outline. The are bold will enough detail so you know what it is, but not a lot so it gets crowded or jumbled.Notice how Jaha took out the small details nearing the top of the building. He didn't have all of those details he just had it going straight up. I'd suggest going in a different direction with the way it looks too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL_ArchMadness Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Maybe give a little explanation on the logos, or tell us why you did what you did. And please put a little more effort into these, try cleaning them up and taking some time on them. I like the idea for the first one, but I think the presentation is off. The 2nd one is nothing more than their current logo with the background taken out. http://boards.sportslogos.net/topic/98633-2014-nfl-concept-expansion-series-dallas-cowboys/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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