jaker52 Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 here i will post my long term project of redoing the nba's logos and uniforms. feel free to give feedback or even post your own nba concepts. I will also be updating all thesefirst is the memphis grizzlies. please give feedback MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 Why not use the Memphis Grizzlie's logo instead of UC-Arkansas? This is just a fusion of UCA and Villanova. Lacks creativity and care. I'd go back to the drawing board. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 This is a straight rip off of villanova's uniforms. A careless, extremely un-creative effort. If you want feedback then I say to be creative and come up with something authentic to you and be original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted April 5, 2014 Author Share Posted April 5, 2014 a memphis court as well MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 a memphis court as wellNo.... just no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chilton92 Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 Sorry, but I have to agree with everyone else. For the uniforms, I'd stray from using a logo on the front (except for Golden State since they can pull it off). The wordmark you chose is fine, so why not use it on the uniforms? The court doesn't work either. There's a reason why NBA teams don't use colored floors. Simply put, it's a decent start, but it needs work. http://www.manic-expression.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 Asks for feedback. Receives negative feedback. Proceeds to post unoriginal concepts and ignores the feedback.... This is all too consistent on the forums these days...It looks like you downloaded a font from Conrad and typed out GRIZZLIES. Then you take a college uniform and paste another colleges logo on it that was recoloured on MS Paint. Start over again, look at other peoples Basketball concepts, look how they do it - the ones with the POSITIVE feedback. Come up with your own original idea, get Illustrator or Paint.NET or some decent free designing program and start over. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted April 5, 2014 Author Share Posted April 5, 2014 idk why i still am doing this but i took some advice and here are the spursand a tb to the rainbow logoand the court MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 that spurs court and road jersey are probably two of the worst concepts I have seen on these boards.. ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chilton92 Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 I'm gonna say this as nicely and respectfully as I can...Are you even listening to the others??? You did the exact same thing with the Spurs as you did with the Grizzles. Heck, even the number fonts are the same. I'm sorry, but nothing you're doing would work in the NBA. We all want you to improve, but it's not gonna happen if you don't put effort into your work. And if you want to use Paint, go for it. But even Paint concepts can look good. These are just lazy. Don't take any of this the wrong way, but really pay attention to the criticism everyone's giving you. http://www.manic-expression.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Audiodrama Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 I appreciate your efforts. That said, this is a collective forum of creativity. When posting a concept, you need to adhere to two things: make it original, and listen to feedback. Otherwise, there's no point in posting your work here.Respectfully, scrap this series and start a new one with fresh concepts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 My first piece of advice would be to not copy other team's uniforms. That's not a concept, it's a ripoff. The second is with your court. 1) you're showing a college court, which doesn't fit with your NBA concept. 2) what court have you ever seen where the writing goes on the sidelines, and not baselines? I think you need to spend some time researching design elements of an NBA court and uniforms before you can begin to create a realistic concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyingBuckeye7 Posted April 6, 2014 Share Posted April 6, 2014 .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(probably)notabandwagonfan Posted April 6, 2014 Share Posted April 6, 2014 That's not even a college court, that's a high school court or a women's court. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted April 6, 2014 Author Share Posted April 6, 2014 Guys , im really trying to improve but yalls feedback isnt helpful. i want yall to be specific so i can actually improve. saying that it sucks doesnt help. so ill post some thunder unis for yall to hate on. but this time be specific with yalls "critizism". this time ill keep working on it till yall like it MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(probably)notabandwagonfan Posted April 6, 2014 Share Posted April 6, 2014 Guys , im really trying to improve but yalls feedback isnt helpful. i want yall to be specific so i can actually improve. saying that it sucks doesnt help. so ill post some thunder unis for yall to hate on. but this time be specific with yalls "critizism". this time ill keep working on it till yall like itWell... The Grizzlies uniforms look like the Christmas jerseys, those were pretty bad... The spurs home is boring and unprofessional, it looks like the star came from a stock picture and has nothing to do with the identity while the road is awful. While the courts are unique, they would look very bad in reality. Your Thunder concept is much better, especially the home. Try using wordmarks instead of logos on the jersey's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted April 6, 2014 Share Posted April 6, 2014 My first criticism is to stop using generic nike basketball uniform templates (that are used by college teams already) and create a more unique and original template or one that is blank and then add some more original details. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted April 6, 2014 Share Posted April 6, 2014 The okc set is much better than the previous two but I would still recommend being more creative and original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chilton92 Posted April 6, 2014 Share Posted April 6, 2014 That's more like it. For the home, though, I wouldn't use the full name. Just having "Thunder" would look better in my opinion. But this is still an improvement over the others. http://www.manic-expression.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted April 6, 2014 Author Share Posted April 6, 2014 My first criticism is to stop using generic nike basketball uniform templates (that are used by college teams already) and create a more unique and original template or one that is blank and then add some more original details.do u know how to do that i have a macbook pro and not much cash. as soon as i knew how id do it right away MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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