TheGiantsFan Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 Okay, I don't really hate the current Tampa Bay Rays identity, but I feel that it kinda needs an overhaul, so here we go...So far, I only have initial sketches for my concept:I'd want to lean more towards the "sunnier" aspect of the Rays as I think it'll somewhat diversify the color schemes in the MLB, with a light blue and yellow color scheme for the Rays.I'd like to ask what cap logo you guys think would be the best. Options 1, 2, and 3 could either be yellow or blue while Option 4 would be of two colors, just like the Twins.Any feedback is appreciated and I'll try to incorporate them as I tackle the Rays' identity...~ Daryl BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 A, but both colors. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted August 13, 2014 Author Share Posted August 13, 2014 A, but both colors.Hmm, would you think this would be on a white front panel cap? BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 Yeah, I'm a fan of those kind of hats. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgthree Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 I like TB #4, however I would make the the letters interlock instead of layered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdRice97 Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 I like dgthree's idea for #4 interlocked. I would say either have the stem of the T behind the B on the top and bottom crossings while in front on the middle, or vice verse. I'm looking forward to another one of your hand-drawn concepts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted August 14, 2014 Author Share Posted August 14, 2014 Thanks for the feedback, guys! I really appreciate it!I decided to go with mamiller99's suggestion about a white panel cap, dgthree's suggestion on interlocking letter with a layout suggested by AdRice97. Now that I have a better idea for the cap, any feedback on the scripts before I go on to the next stage of sketches? BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted August 15, 2014 Author Share Posted August 15, 2014 Any other feedback, guys? BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SFGiants58 Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 I'd say you've made the correct decision with the cap style and logos. With the scripts, I'd suggest putting them on an angle and matching the "T" and "B" on the "Tampa Bay" script to the "T" and "B" of the #4 cap logo. Use the basic font from two scripts on the right. It would be better to use a yellow outline on both home and road, and don't use a tail on the scripts (the tail is a little unnecessary, and the scripts look fine without them). Do that, and you'd have a lovely set for the Rays. MLB: Project 32 (Complete), MLB: The Defunct Saga (Complete) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted August 15, 2014 Author Share Posted August 15, 2014 I'd say you've made the correct decision with the cap style and logos. With the scripts, I'd suggest putting them on an angle and matching the "T" and "B" on the "Tampa Bay" script to the "T" and "B" of the #4 cap logo. Use the basic font from two scripts on the right. It would be better to use a yellow outline on both home and road, and don't use a tail on the scripts (the tail is a little unnecessary, and the scripts look fine without them). Do that, and you'd have a lovely set for the Rays.Thanks for the feedback! I decided to incorporate your suggestions into a sketch design for a home jersey.I'll stop blabbing and show you what I have so far.I'll still be open to any feedback I receive, but I have the idea of a home jersey with light blue piping throughout with "Rays" spelled out fairly large across the chest. A number and NOB that would be on the back of the jersey are shown on the right and the new cap logo can be seen at the top.What do you guys think?~ Daryl BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 I really like how that home jersey looks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted August 16, 2014 Author Share Posted August 16, 2014 I really like how that home jersey looks.Thank you!-------------------------------------------So before I draw up the final jersey sheet, I'd like your guys' opinion on the wordmarks for the other jerseys in this set.Basically, seen on this picture are the aforementioned wordmarks as well as a potential secondary logo.The secondary logo could go without the light blue circle, but I am planning to do some sort of roundel for the primary logo.As for the wordmarks, you see the road wordmark and the alternate jersey wordmarks. There will be a light blue home alt jersey as well as a yellow (home and road) alt jersey.What do you guys think?~ Daryl BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MSRebel22 Posted August 16, 2014 Share Posted August 16, 2014 You never fail to disappoint Daryl, I like it if you don't mind how about a ray logo. Fins Up!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted August 16, 2014 Author Share Posted August 16, 2014 You never fail to disappoint Daryl, I like it if you don't mind how about a ray logo.Thank you! And you mean a logo with the animal ray, right? Just wanna make sure. Haha. BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted August 17, 2014 Author Share Posted August 17, 2014 Well, I got no other feedback, so I decided to go right on ahead in posting the final concept. So here it is!Earlier today, I came up with a brilliant idea to combine both the devil ray logo (as suggested by MSRebel22) and the sun ray logo as I was originally intending to use. So that's the new primary logo instead of the roundel I was originally planning to do. The jerseys are fairly self-explanatory, with a light blue alt jersey at home and a yellow alt jersey on the road (the yellow jersey could also be used at home, though). The caps also incorporate all the team's colors, with the regular cap with a white front panel along with light blue and yellow caps that go with the colored alt jerseys.And there's my Tampa Bay Rays concept, guys! Tell me what you guys think of it!Also, stay tuned as I will be redesigning the San Diego Padres here and I will be posting on my main thread with new updates sometime soon.~ Daryl BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted August 17, 2014 Share Posted August 17, 2014 That devil/sun ray is brilliant. The uniforms are flawless as well. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newenglandpatriots Posted August 17, 2014 Share Posted August 17, 2014 Well, I got no other feedback, so I decided to go right on ahead in posting the final concept. So here it is!Earlier today, I came up with a brilliant idea to combine both the devil ray logo (as suggested by MSRebel22) and the sun ray logo as I was originally intending to use. So that's the new primary logo instead of the roundel I was originally planning to do. The jerseys are fairly self-explanatory, with a light blue alt jersey at home and a yellow alt jersey on the road (the yellow jersey could also be used at home, though). The caps also incorporate all the team's colors, with the regular cap with a white front panel along with light blue and yellow caps that go with the colored alt jerseys.And there's my Tampa Bay Rays concept, guys! Tell me what you guys think of it!Also, stay tuned as I will be redesigning the San Diego Padres here and I will be posting on my main thread with new updates sometime soon.~ DarylWow, those are great! The ray/sun logo is fantastic. Only thing I'd change would be the alternate. PATS, BRUINS, CELTICS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SFGiants58 Posted August 17, 2014 Share Posted August 17, 2014 Now that's a great look for the Rays. It takes advantage of the bright color scheme, has enough connection to both identities (sun rays and the devil rays), and just looks plain fantastic. Well done! MLB: Project 32 (Complete), MLB: The Defunct Saga (Complete) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raysfan12 Posted August 17, 2014 Share Posted August 17, 2014 As a Rays fan, I love the light blue and yellow color scheme because it fits well with the culture of the Tampa Bay Area and unique compared to the current color scheme. It might be lively enough to eliminate some the drowsiness from the Trop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TVIXX Posted August 18, 2014 Share Posted August 18, 2014 Like always, great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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