YelichGraphics Posted November 6, 2014 Author Share Posted November 6, 2014 Okay I don't want to get in trouble for bumping but come on. Can we get at least more than one on a few concepts. Because I'm getting a comment almost for every three concepts. Let's get some comments on here guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted November 6, 2014 Share Posted November 6, 2014 The chargers are pretty good, but i think they could benifit from more navy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted November 6, 2014 Share Posted November 6, 2014 not a fan of how u make the sleeves a different color from the shoulder bolt on the away jersey but both are white on the home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted November 10, 2014 Author Share Posted November 10, 2014 chargers update may take awhile. I'm concerting my template into inkscape.any c & c are welcome while I work on this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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martymcfry Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 Oh no... this is bad. If you use this design at all replace black with gray, but I would just scrap it and start over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 The pants stipes are kind of confusing. I'd simplify those a bit if I was you. Also, I'm not really a fan of the number on the helmet. I like it otherwise, especially more powder blue. And instead of converting this to inkscape, Brave-Bird put out a nice SVG template that the template you're using was based off of. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 That Eagles concept is... interesting. I do not like the green. I think you should try grey and kelly green. However, I do like the wings on the shoulders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 the wings on the shoulders for the eagles have to go. make sure the pants stripes are both the same fro the black and white pants because right now they're different and its weird. i also agree that you should experiment with grey if you'll use this green or just darken the green a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 Saints - Overall good look, check the spacing on the wordmark to see if it is the same height on the home and away. It may be an optical illusion caused by the gold outline of the numbers, but it's worth a look. Helmet stripes are a little thin IMO. (fixed with the newer template) Cardinals - I love the addition of sand. maybe make your stripes a bit bolder, and it would stand out more. Dallas - Best Cowboys concept I've seen in a very long time. Don't change anything. Giants - I really like this a lot. It's very different for the NFL, but cool. You fixed the one thing I was going to comment on in your follow-up. Packers - No complaints. You took the conservative route here, and that is to be expected when dealing with Green bay. Jets - This is cool! I would suggest tweaking the logo to look more modern since everything else is more modern looking. Bills - Spot on. I dig it. Broncos - I see where you're going, but I'm not really behind this one as much as your others. Plus, 3 small stripes would never be found on a Nike product. Vikings - This is interesting and different. I'm not sure how I feel about it. It has a very Arena Football vibe to me. Raiders - So much yes. I love how you're tapping into the blackout and gray fads right now. Titans - I like this. It really brings back memories of the Oilers to me. Bears - Don't change anything. Tampa Bay - I think you polished this turd as much as possible. You took their new look (which sucks IMO) and made it as tolerable as possible. Chargers - Yes. Eagles - This is a very modern look, which is cool, but that shade of green is brutal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted November 14, 2014 Author Share Posted November 14, 2014 Thank you guys for the comments. i will keep the wings for now and change the colors. also i may change a couple more that JCR Mentiond Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 For the record, the blocks that are in the middle are there to show what's on the sleeves. For example, with your chargers concept, the left side should be white with the numbers. The right one should be blue with the numbers. @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted November 14, 2014 Author Share Posted November 14, 2014 ohhh woops. well i'll keep it as it is for this concept but my next one ill change that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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PaperThin Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 Eagles now look 10x better with the new shade of green. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted November 14, 2014 Author Share Posted November 14, 2014 Eagles now look 10x better with the new shade of green. Good job.thanks. i like the new green too. thought the helmet came out really nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 eagles look much much better. still fix the pants stripes and I'm satisfied Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted November 15, 2014 Share Posted November 15, 2014 For the Eagles I don't like the choice of black. Plus the wings look a bit wired and there's no need for the eagle head to be in the middle of the word mark on the chest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted November 15, 2014 Share Posted November 15, 2014 Eagles are much much better with that new shade of green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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