AAO Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rnewvy9 Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 are you going to do all 30 mlb teams? (besides the ones you already did)you should,anyways they are all great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 12, 2005 Author Share Posted January 12, 2005 actually yea i am, im going in alphabetical order. thanks. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiasco! Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 you are prolific...that's for sure.good stuff.one thing, though. the tail on the 's' is awfully forced....and unneeded in my opinion.otherwise, excellent job. LinkedIn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 12, 2005 Author Share Posted January 12, 2005 good observation joel. thanks. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blake Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 sweet stuff love the maroon alt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaolinaJoe Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 Hey, I love your work. It is all really great, but these all seem to blending together now. I think you may be stepping on your own creativity. "It is the soldier, not the reporter, who has given us freedom of thepress. It is the soldier, not the poet, who has given us freedom ofspeech. It is the soldier, not the campus organizer, who has given usthe freedom to demonstrate. And it is the soldier who salutes theflag, serves beneath the flag, whose coffin is draped by the flag, andwho allows the protester to burn the flag."Marine Chaplain Dennis Edward O' Brien Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buffalo soldier Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 awesome job. can't wait to see cleveland (i think thats whose next) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 12, 2005 Author Share Posted January 12, 2005 thanks guys. yup clevelands next. need to brew up some ideas for them. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclopsis Joe Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 I can barely read "Reds" on the home Jersey..other than that, awesome. I don't speak for democrats, democrats don't speak for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 12, 2005 Author Share Posted January 12, 2005 thanks joe...but hmm thats odd i guess its the difference in monitors for us because its really clear on mine. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 introducing the cincinatti maroons!!!! lighten up the red and you got it On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshawaggie Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 maroon is a shade of red, and since they are the reds, they should have multiple shades of red! bwahaha @josh_j12 CFA- Fargo Bobcats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 12, 2005 Author Share Posted January 12, 2005 exactly joshj. its just a two tone red, like the grizzlies have two tone blue. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 the crique on this is:1. do some in-depth research. find a cincinnati man and get some info on the two or three most distinguishable cincinnati skyscrapers, (pnc building, etc.) add the bridge where space opens up, because the bridges and the ohio river are a huge part of cincinnati and its industry and history. its the same way here in cleveland.2. the home jersey. its way too hard to read because the maroon does not contrast the red enough. make the maroon outline smaller and/or space out the letters/numbers more to distingush them and make them more legible. 3. on the others, your sleeve striping is white/color, but on the neck its just a white pipe. i think you could improve the unity by making the neck striping white, then a colored ring around the neck opening.4. the C looks very forced, as it has little sylistically in common with the wordmarks. i think youd be better suited with a c of the same style or of a similar font. and remember, every logo doesnt need a baseball in it, and in my opinion, theyre better if they dont. just look how few nfl logos have footballs in them.5. this was probably just an oversight, but the charcoal belts should be red or maroon where applicable.youd better not make a mess of the indians. im trusting you. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 12, 2005 Author Share Posted January 12, 2005 thanks for the critiquebut on my monitor the wordmark on the home is completely legible, but i guess not for others. and without a baseball in the logo, it'd just be the skyline and nothing more. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 oops. i meant the c w/ball logo, not skyline w/ ball. i do think the skyline could work well with just the wordmark though. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 1. do some in-depth research. find a cincinnati man and get some info on the two or three most distinguishable cincinnati skyscrapers, (pnc building, etc.) add the bridge where space opens up, because the bridges and the ohio river are a huge part of cincinnati and its industry and history. its the same way here in cleveland. i sent him to my site already lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thejroll Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 Excellent work, again. I like how there is no black used for the sake of using black. The two shades fo red work perfectly together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 12, 2005 Author Share Posted January 12, 2005 thanks Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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