irondudez Posted April 8, 2005 Share Posted April 8, 2005 this is my first logo set that I've ever made, so its not that great, but i'm happy with what i ended up with. I'm thinking these would look great with a baseball uniform.comments and criticism is welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilaLogos Posted April 8, 2005 Share Posted April 8, 2005 haha, thats pretty weird cuz I have a fantasy football concept for a team called the Orlando Sharks . This isn't bad. The shape of the head is odd, maybe look at a shark as a reference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted April 8, 2005 Share Posted April 8, 2005 You've got the right idea. Definitely onto something.It just doesnt look like a shark to me though. The fins are too close to the front. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted April 8, 2005 Share Posted April 8, 2005 Either the front of the body needs to be wider or the back narrower--I like the face and the concept--just needs some tweaking of the body shape... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nafsder2003 Posted April 9, 2005 Share Posted April 9, 2005 As others have said, the shark definately looks a little...unsharklike. Too me it looks kind of like an angry dolphin. The reason I say dolphin is because it looks like the shark is leaping. Leaping is kind of associated more with dolphins and whales and stuff. Maybe if you made the shark in a little creapier motion...like stalking its prey or something...I dunno. As for the wordmark, I'm not a fan of the Orlando only because of the style of the o's and the spacing between the letters.With the "Sharks" part of the wordmark, there is a large gap formed by the r touching the k. Maybe it would be kind of cool if you changed the font to fit the dorsal (is the the right word?) fin of the shark in there. Like a shark kind of turning under the word "Sharks" with the dorsal fin filling the void of the r. I dunno, just suggestions. I do like the colors a lot. It's a good clean first try, but too simple, and too cartoony. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted April 9, 2005 Share Posted April 9, 2005 What are Sharks Orlando ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 10, 2005 Author Share Posted April 10, 2005 thanks for the tips guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WSU151 Posted April 10, 2005 Share Posted April 10, 2005 To me the a's in the wordmarks look like o's. Orlondo Shorks...probably not want you want Smart is believing half of what you hear. Genius is knowing which half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted April 10, 2005 Share Posted April 10, 2005 You've got the right idea. Definitely onto something.It just doesnt look like a shark to me though. The fins are too close to the front. looks more like the Orlando Mad Arrows to me. i like it On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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