eRay Posted March 14, 2006 Share Posted March 14, 2006 I think the titans could use a new look, because they are a team that is changing alot and will keep doing so for a couple years. I wanted a modern look that wasnt too cluttered. saved as .swf for zooming. the logos look bad, but you get the idea. C&C welcome.http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f204/emr1/titans.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
floydnimrod Posted March 14, 2006 Share Posted March 14, 2006 I like the use of the red but i think it should be used more!The helmet logo seems a bit small, and there i something about the number font, its just prolly that no one else uses it and its unique. but overall, well done. Mancakes: The Bandhttps://twitter.com/FloydNimrod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted March 14, 2006 Share Posted March 14, 2006 Umm, it's decent. The helmet is questionable, but I like your use of the sword logo on the pant leg. I personally think they should use the flames more. I like your use of red, also. They used to have a red jersey with navy shoulders that they sold as an alt. jersey, but they never wore it. I'll see if I can find a pic of it. I can tell you right now that they would not use those numbers, though. Overall, though, pretty good.BTW, what program did you do this on? Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted March 14, 2006 Share Posted March 14, 2006 BTW, what program did you do this on?see titlethe concept is alright. I can't say the helmet or font is an upgrade over what they currently have, but the rest looks pretty good facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logodawg Posted March 14, 2006 Share Posted March 14, 2006 Personally, I prefer what they have currently.Honestly, there isn't much on this that I really can say that I like. The helmet logo is way too small and the placement just doesn't seem right to me.The number font doesn't seem right either. I want to say that it isn't "strong" enough for me. It doesn't add to the statement of the jersey; they're just sort of there.Overall, I think this is a good start that needs refining. Keep at it. I once had a car but I crashed it. I once had a guitar but I smashed it. I once, wait where am I going with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted March 14, 2006 Author Share Posted March 14, 2006 when i started out on the jerseys i used red a lot more than is shown, but I thought it looked bad every time i did it. the same can be said about the helmet. i just couldnt get it to look right. i will update probably tomorrow sometime, with a new number font i like alot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted March 14, 2006 Author Share Posted March 14, 2006 Update with more red, new font, and new helmet layout. still looks a little off to me, but i cant tell why. C&C appreciated.http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f204/emr1/titans2.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted March 14, 2006 Share Posted March 14, 2006 I actually prefer the first try at this, with the exception of the number font, which is a little refined and doesn't mesh well with the Titans' wordmark. On the 2nd, there's a little too much red. You kept enough red in the concept - on the helmet logo and patches - that much more beyond that draws too much attention to the red and away from the double blue. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted March 14, 2006 Share Posted March 14, 2006 Very nice. I like these numerals much better, along with the added red.BTW, I now see that you used Illustrator. Thanks, I guess I didn't look there. Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted March 15, 2006 Share Posted March 15, 2006 Why the 2 different navy pants? They don't need 2 pants that are the same color where only the outside stripes change from Lt. Blue to White. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted March 15, 2006 Author Share Posted March 15, 2006 i think a team could go with 2 sets of navy pants and get away with it. instead of having navy and white, they have navy and navy. it really isnt that hard to fathom. they might not need them, but i chose to include it in my concept. thanx for the input all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted March 15, 2006 Share Posted March 15, 2006 I think the red is used strangely here, either it should be dropped or made more prevelant (my vote). Also, the helmet looks awkward and high school-ish...maybe try the sword/shield logo on the helmet and use some striping? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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