irondudez Posted April 9, 2006 Share Posted April 9, 2006 well here it is... C&C Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hat Boy Posted April 9, 2006 Share Posted April 9, 2006 The team name is near illegible and the 'cudas face needs some work. The mouth looks like two separate pieces. You are off to a great start, but this one needs some cleaning up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted April 9, 2006 Share Posted April 9, 2006 the barrcuda doesn't look smooth enough. it's hard to describe, but it almost looks like it is in several pieces. I don't really like how you mixed a classicish template (circle logo, ball in center, logo over baseball, city name in the circle) with the modern, graffiti-ish wordmark (barracudas). I think this is a good start though.Do you plan on doing jerseys? Because I would like to see them facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyFriedRice Posted April 9, 2006 Share Posted April 9, 2006 The colors and logo are a little too Seattle Mariners. It's an object (teal and silver) in front of a ball. That's Seattle's logo.I agree that the barracuda doesn't look quite right. It does look very jagged. Like a 1990s Microsoft Office clipart image.But it's a good rough draft. Now you just need to chisel a little more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted April 10, 2006 Share Posted April 10, 2006 Font is almost unreadable and the Barracuda looks upside down. On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 16, 2006 Author Share Posted April 16, 2006 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted April 16, 2006 Share Posted April 16, 2006 bump you could have bumped it with an improved version facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted April 16, 2006 Share Posted April 16, 2006 Yeah, I really couldn't tell what this was if you didn;t say so in the topic description. The font has to go and I think I speak for everyone when I say that. I don't know how to put it but the Barracuda looks kind of off, a good start but it needs some cleaning up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted April 16, 2006 Share Posted April 16, 2006 I don't know about you but i think this is even better then the Devil Rays logo to be honest!!! Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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