Conrad. Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 ______________>> Click for Bigger Version <<C&C? tell me if u see anything wrong (im sure there is) or maybe the colors are off...i need input so i can make it perfect based on this: Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMU Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 a lot of the deer's detail is off, especially the mouth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 it looks like 'milwaukee' should extend from the start of the U to the end of the K in "bucks", and the face has been simplified or something, looks way off. oh, and the box with the wordmark in it needs to be moved up a little bit, too much of the white chest is showing, and the triangle on the bottom looks too small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 Your beveling is way off. I realize you're trying to replicate it based on a small low resolution image, but it looks as if this is a pretty classic bevel, i.e., there is a centerline through each letter with a miter at the ends and the light source at the upper left. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 29, 2006 Author Share Posted May 29, 2006 Your beveling is way off. I realize you're trying to replicate it based on a small low resolution image, but it looks as if this is a pretty classic bevel, i.e., there is a centerline through each letter with a miter at the ends and the light source at the upper left. ok cool..yea i wasnt quite sure of the bevel...im glad you cleared that up, I'll see what i can doand the other things, I'll try to change those as well...keep the crit comin please Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted May 30, 2006 Share Posted May 30, 2006 Your letters also need to be thicker and the green box needs to be manipulated so that it is an equal distange from all sides of the B and the S and the baseline of the other letters I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 31, 2006 Author Share Posted May 31, 2006 >> fixed the bevel>> fixed the deer detail>> fixed the "Milwaukee" size>> fixed the green boxHow does this look? What more shall i change? Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted May 31, 2006 Share Posted May 31, 2006 wow that's pretty dang close, from what i can see.great job. | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 You are showing us that the new Bucks logo is basically a deer holding a license plate. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 That shadow probably won't be there. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrAsterisk Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 "MILWAUKEE" is too bold and too tall, but otherwise it's pretty much spot on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted June 1, 2006 Author Share Posted June 1, 2006 "MILWAUKEE" is too bold and too tall, but otherwise it's pretty much spot on. yea i'll try to fix that...lol @ TCR more crit please (tempest where u at?) Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 Well, you may have 'fixed' all those things, but the only thing I can tell has been changed on Version 2 is the face. So, here you go. The only problem areas I ran into are the upper right corners of the B, C and S. The bevel up there isn't exactly right, but everything else is about perfect. Based on the :censored:ty picture, the bevel is really strange. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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