GameCock82 Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 Through excellent coaching and critiquing I believe this logo package is almost finished. It is for a fantasy arena football team. C&C is welcome, thanks and enjoy. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 He looks a little wide, maybe trim him down a bit. Another idea is to give him a pair of boots to go with his uniform. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike2sana Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 Put the "heros" H on his chest and give him red boots kinda like this ATL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 updated -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 Looking better. Maybe try using a different colour than gray on the guy to make the logo more vivid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redskins24 Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 I think this looks really great, though, his stomach still looks a little too wide and he may be almost too muscular. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben5 Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 Yeah, tighten up his stomach. The first thing I thought of when I saw the H was Hawaii. Maybe don't curve the bottom? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 The addition of the H really helps this design. There is something about the HEROES font that looks a bit off. I think it is how the S dips. It should be made to line up level with the rest of the text. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sc49erfan15 Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 It's extremely well rendered, and I think it has a lot of potential. But right now, to be honest, I'm not feeling it. Like others said, his stomach is a little too wide...must have some thick hipbones. Also, something about his hair and face just says "35 year-old child molester with a combover" instead of "superhero." Maybe try a full-face mask?I'd also un-stretch the "Philadelphia" text, it just looks...stretched.Also, what's that extra...thing in between his pecs and biceps? I'd take that out, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonBlazer Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 I'm not inte team name. But the logo for it is cool. http://www.reverbnation.com/richardyerardihttp://www.ahlfans.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephen93 Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 I'm not inte team name. But the logo for it is cool. better than the.... soul.... which is one if not the worst name ever created, i mean someone probably got paid for coming up with that name, which is terrible.But i love the name, colors, logo, i think that with the improvments made this is basically perfect. nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cooleyvol Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 I think a 'P' on his chest rather than the 'H' would be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted July 3, 2006 Author Share Posted July 3, 2006 updated -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spartacat_12 Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 i like this concept. i think for the helmet u should put the superhero logo sans wordmark on one side and the "H" on the other side. if the helmet was navy with a red facemask i think it would turn out nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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