kkempton Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 After some considerable time since my first (and rather poor attempt), I return with a new concept design for The Dallas Stars new alternate jersey, seeing as they axed the old 'Mootaurus' one.Im not too sure what it is, but it reminds me of something else. No idea what though.Anyways, All comments, crit and any other random messages are more than welcome, even if its just to say Great Job, or This is the biggest Monstrosity ever!Thanks for your time.Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Looks great! I especially like how the stripes at the bottom look like a 'swoosh'. It also shows how not all third jerseys need a different logo. But if you're going to change anything, you might want to make the white stripe smaller. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonBlazer Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 The striping pattern at the bottom isn't giving enough space for the name and number. I'd make them thinner. Either than that, it's nice. http://www.reverbnation.com/richardyerardihttp://www.ahlfans.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 I don't have a problem with the curved stripes on the bottom, or the straight ones on the sleeves, they are both well done. My problem is that you've used both of those styles together. Why include two completly different kinds of striping on a jersey? It just looks weird IMO. I think you need to pick one and stick with it. A little more green couldn't hurt either. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 The striping pattern at the bottom isn't giving enough space for the name and number. I'd make them thinner. Either than that, it's nice. This and steiny's comment are what I thought--I'd make the bottom stipes straight and thinner--I thought they looked like a cummerbund--but there is potential here. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 the primary color is green... gold is only used as a trim color, for the stars... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkempton Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 Thankyou for your comments.Based on the suggestions, I will now rework this design incorporatign these features.Thankyou for the comments so far.Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 The bottom waving stripe doesn't match the striping on the sleeves very well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkempton Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 Thankyou for all the comments, and based on the opinions and suggestions, Ive redeigned the Jersey, as shown below.Keep the comments comming. Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 That's better. The sleeve stripes work much better now. Although for a third jersey, it's colours are arranged a little bit too similar to the home jersey. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkempton Posted August 24, 2006 Author Share Posted August 24, 2006 That's better. The sleeve stripes work much better now. Although for a third jersey, it's colours are arranged a little bit too similar to the home jersey. Hmm possibly, possibly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn89 Posted August 24, 2006 Share Posted August 24, 2006 The green one is MUCH better than the black one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted August 24, 2006 Share Posted August 24, 2006 I like the black one better NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkempton Posted August 25, 2006 Author Share Posted August 25, 2006 I like the black one better Interesting.What if it had the design elements of number 2, yet the colour layout of number one?Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 Go for it. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkempton Posted August 26, 2006 Author Share Posted August 26, 2006 Heres the newest redesign:Comments are as always appreciated.kev Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 That's much better now. Only thing wrong is that the green is gone from the stars logo... PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jkrdevil Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 Thankyou for all the comments, and based on the opinions and suggestions, Ive redeigned the Jersey, as shown below.Keep the comments comming. Kev. That one I like the best. Reminds me of the North Star unis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkempton Posted August 26, 2006 Author Share Posted August 26, 2006 Done.Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 can't see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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