cappital92 Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 I'm applying for a fantasy baseball team on the boards and I want to have a decent logo,so I'd like some C+C so I can improve my creation.C+C is welcomed very much. http://www.wizardsxtra.com Is it the shoes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cappital92 Posted February 11, 2007 Author Share Posted February 11, 2007 I really don't wanna do this,but...BUMP! http://www.wizardsxtra.com Is it the shoes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendan Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 why is there an a if the team is called the civics. make the logo neater aswell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 why is there an a if the team is called the civics. make the logo neater aswellMaybe "VA" for Virginia (postal abbreviation)?Anyway... an okay concept... but looks very poorly done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor R. Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 I dont get what it has to do with the civics and it is not very well done Go Lakers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cappital92 Posted February 12, 2007 Author Share Posted February 12, 2007 I got rid of the grey shield and made the outline cover the entire script . Does it look better? http://www.wizardsxtra.com Is it the shoes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 don't take offense, but if this isn't a joke, i think you need to hear the harsh reality...this isn't good at allthe legs of the V rise at different angles and the left leg makes an abrupt upturn - the angles at the end of each letter are inconsistent - you've got some funky "spots" on each end at each intersection - the colors don't work well, in my opinion and your font choice and treatment is uninspired - to form your VA, it might be easier to find a font that gives you the desired affect when interlocked...i was just playing around with a couple of fonts and noticed that you could even form a pretty cool diamond in the negative space created with the overlap/interlock of those letters...maybe you could play with that to give it more of a baseball feel...sorry to be so harsh, but this needs significant work to be even decent - keep working with it and pay attention to the little details and you'll have something you can be happy with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 okay if i was on a team of any sport i wouldn't want to be called the civics Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cappital92 Posted February 27, 2007 Author Share Posted February 27, 2007 okay if i was on a team of any sport i wouldn't want to be called the civicsWell, I'm real sure that the members of the Boston AL team and Green Bay NFL team LOVE their team names. Anyway,leggman01,I did another design based on what you said.This is more of a "idea"concept. I just want to see if it looks good,or to pull the plug.[ http://www.wizardsxtra.com Is it the shoes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 i was thinking of something a bit more subtle...if you'd like some help with this, let me know..i've got some ideas that i can run by you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 i think that if you want to do something with the logo that is a V and an A, then you should download some really cool fonts. a lot of sans-serif fonts would work, and try to match good, clean fonts, and overlap them. that will give you a much better looks that if you try to draw them out. or maybe you will find a cool design that you could draw out and make it your own.as for the colors...well blue and maroon dont really go together too well. try using some fonts, and see how that treats you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drevel Posted February 28, 2007 Share Posted February 28, 2007 What is behind the nickname of "the civics"? I thin the interlock V & A is cool though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cappital92 Posted February 28, 2007 Author Share Posted February 28, 2007 What is behind the nickname of "the civics"? I thin the interlock V & A is cool though.Well,Virginia is the home of many historical actions in US CIVIC government,so is sorta clicked.I was also thinking Rebels. http://www.wizardsxtra.com Is it the shoes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted February 28, 2007 Share Posted February 28, 2007 this is something i threw together pretty quickly...i tried to work the diamond into the design, but it looked forced, so i went with an overlapping VA...changed the colors, too - feel free to use it if you'd like, and anyone else can feel free to pick it apartthe second mark is intended as a cap mark, and the .ai file actually has a white outline - i would envision the mark being placed on a cap the color of the dark blue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted February 28, 2007 Share Posted February 28, 2007 yeah, this thread got me thinking too, and thats similar to the one i came up with. i think its great, nice and clean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drevel Posted February 28, 2007 Share Posted February 28, 2007 Nice job leggman01. I hope to see this on a jersey and baseball helmet cappital92 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDR Posted February 28, 2007 Share Posted February 28, 2007 I'm applying for a fantasy baseball team on the boards and I want to have a decent logo,so I'd like some C+C so I can improve my creation.C+C is welcomed very much. this is something i threw together pretty quickly...i tried to work the diamond into the design, but it looked forced, so i went with an overlapping VA...changed the colors, too - feel free to use it if you'd like, and anyone else can feel free to pick it apartthe second mark is intended as a cap mark, and the .ai file actually has a white outline - i would envision the mark being placed on a cap the color of the dark blueI can't decide. I like them both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DailyRich Posted February 28, 2007 Share Posted February 28, 2007 If you want to keep the diamond idea and the colors... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted March 1, 2007 Share Posted March 1, 2007 If you want to keep the diamond idea and the colors...i actually played with something similar...problem is, that reads as AV to me, rather than VA...solid execution, though, and i like the way you incorporated the basepaths Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speedy Posted March 1, 2007 Share Posted March 1, 2007 okay if i was on a team of any sport i wouldn't want to be called the civicsWell, I'm real sure that the members of the Boston AL team and Green Bay NFL team LOVE their team names. Red Sox? Packers? What the hell's wrong with those? Those are two classy timeless names, don't know what your logic was behind that remark.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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