patsox Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 C+C Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 I'm pretty sure I've seen this before, also pretty sure it was you, with this same concept...The red just seems forced to me... Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJSpeedy Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 Your outlining abilities are just horrible. Most noticeably on the primary logo, the jersey number, and cap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ravenmaster Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 Gag! That red outline on the crappy new style Blue Jays logo is garish. The red outline everywhere is bad, and looks like a horrible attempt at a Canada Day jersey.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Blue_Jay-27527.jpgObserve the Blue Jay, then rework around his colours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 So you added a red outline. Big deal.What happened with the Celtics concept? Give up already? Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uga_dawgs24 Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 The red does seem a bit forced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 They have already worn someting like that -http://sportslogos.net/logo.php?lo=q3rwvj3joy2eyp9ayxkfhttp://sportslogos.net/logo.php?lo=e5lsbx201qpogmnve3jv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GypsyHunter Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 ...yeah, on Canada Day. The thing is theyre the "Toronto Blue Jays" not the "Toronto Blue But With A Bit Of Red Jays" A blue jay is blue. It's just a bad idea to make the Jays logo red... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted July 5, 2007 Author Share Posted July 5, 2007 So you added a red outline. Big deal.What happened with the Celtics concept? Give up already?I didn't give up. I just stopped getting C+C so I figured it was perfect as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopskid Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 Just curios. What program do you use? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted July 5, 2007 Author Share Posted July 5, 2007 Just curios. What program do you use?Paint, Microsoft Picture It! 10, and sometimes I try to use Inkscape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopskid Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 O ok. Yah it is hard to resize in paint, so now I understand. Not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Audiodrama Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 You did nothing more than trace red around some parts, and erase the "7" from the "97" on the back of the jersey. Spend more time on these and stop insulting the rest of us who put actual time into our efforts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted July 5, 2007 Author Share Posted July 5, 2007 I added a black outline inside the red one, changed the hat, changed the pants outlines, the socks, the belt, and the shade of grey used in the wordmark too. Pay more attention to the concept before you criticize me so quickly, Unwind and stop insulting me and lying about the effort I put into things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Audiodrama Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 I added a black outline inside the red one, changed the hat, changed the pants outlines, the socks, the belt, and the shade of grey used in the wordmark too. Pay more attention to the concept before you criticize me so quickly, Unwind and stop insulting me and lying about the effort I put into things. Look we're both Bostonians so I'll cut ya a break on this one, but you can clearly see where my frustration comes from. The concept really doesn't *do* anything other than unnecessarily adding red. To be honest, I'm sure alot of Toronto residents (Torontonians?) will tell you that they don't like how the Blue Jays currently look (go talk to Creamer). To create a fulfilling Jays concept, you should try and incorporate alot of their classic look into a whole new design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DG_ThenNowForever Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 I don't mean to be rude, but why does everything you do look so terrible? And why do you do so much of it? I mean, this is like year's worth of the same pattern -- you do something crappy and ugly, people tell you it's crappy and ugly, you pledge to do better, and then you give up on what you're doing and start something crappy and ugly. Over and over again. And the few times you have something that looks kind of nice -- like the Boston City FC thing -- you ruin it by making it crappy and ugly. Why does this continue to happen? I was 14 once or whatever age you were. My big hobby was drumming. I didn't sit at a drum set, bang out some crap and call it good. No, I sat and practiced for hours on end every day. I honed my craft and now I'm pretty good. You can't just eventually become good at something. You need to work at it and show effort. Nothing you've done on this board shows that you're working at anything. You're just churning out crap after crap.Why? 1 hour ago, ShutUpLutz! said: and the drunken doodoobags jumping off the tops of SUV's/vans/RV's onto tables because, oh yeah, they are drunken drug abusing doodoobags Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted July 5, 2007 Author Share Posted July 5, 2007 dsgitlin, In my honest opinion this does not look ugly or crappy or terrible. It's certainly not much of a concept but I'd be the first to admit that. I also take offense to you saying EVERYTHING I do looks terrible. Instead of saying something akin to that, why the couldn't you just tell me how to fix or improve it like so few do around her with my concepts. Maybe the reasons why "all my concepts look ugly" is because no one gives me the same C+C as they give others and instead brutally criticize and make fun of me. Maybe that's also part of the reason I "give up on what [i'm] doing and start something crappy and ugly". Oh and by the way, I'm 17 pal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DG_ThenNowForever Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 Oh wow...17 and making stuff that is this consistently terrible? At 14 we can cut some slack. At 17, forget it. Really, forget it. It's time to quit and go home. The reason you get the same damn brutal criticism -- and I realize I'm saying absolutely nothing here you haven't heard before -- is because every thing you do suffers from the same problems. They look rushed, they have spare pixels here and there, there are obvious indications of you half-assing things (like the multicolored Baltimore Orioles hats a bit ago), and your tendency to rush something and then move on without fixing makes a mockery of the critique and comments you hope to get.Seriously, if you still don't know what's wrong with the stuff you're doing, perhaps you should just stop doing it. 1 hour ago, ShutUpLutz! said: and the drunken doodoobags jumping off the tops of SUV's/vans/RV's onto tables because, oh yeah, they are drunken drug abusing doodoobags Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted July 5, 2007 Author Share Posted July 5, 2007 Honestly, besides the fact that this was done it Paint, what is wrong with this (besides the lack of originality)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted July 5, 2007 Share Posted July 5, 2007 This is a perfect example of why... MS PAINT RULES!!! Dude, we try and give people advice on keeping up the effort, even if their stuff is totally lacking. We try and encourage it, because, no matter how bad they are, it just might take a few more bad concepts before they get the hang of it and then, boom, there's a real legitimate piece of work and, who knows, it could be the beginning of something great and great things coming from that person...... You are not one of these people. Give up. Give up while there's still... well... there's no hope for you anymore... But don't let that stop you. Give up anyway. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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