AHcreative Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 You're heading in the right direction, I like the exaggerated thunderbolt but I think the neck needs work. It seems a little long. Also I'd suggest reiterating the tuft somehow. It's looking better, but it still could use some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 try making the beak bigger, it looks a bit too pigeony now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshawaggie Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 where did the cocks go? penisWhat is your obcession with penises lately?? Are you 12? @josh_j12 CFA- Fargo Bobcats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 You're heading in the right direction, I like the exaggerated thunderbolt but I think the neck needs work. It seems a little long. Also I'd suggest reiterating the tuft somehow. It's looking better, but it still could use some work.Do you think I should outline the entire logo in silver? Should I change the colours in different areas? I will definetaly take your suggestions though.ThanksTaylor_27 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 I will work on all your suggestions today, expect to have another design up tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 A few things:1. The entire head of the bird seems large in comparison to the beak..I would look for a way to size it down.2. The striping pattern going across the head and down the front looks odd and out of place- what is its purpose?3. The bolt across the top of the head is a pretty unique addition that I like. I think it could be incorporated better though.4. I think of Bowling Green when I see this concept.5. The eye still looks funny.Good job so far, I do like the name and feel like once you get a good design- it could be vectored into a sharp logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 A few things:1. The entire head of the bird seems large in comparison to the beak..I would look for a way to size it down.2. The striping pattern going across the head and down the front looks odd and out of place- what is its purpose?3. The bolt across the top of the head is a pretty unique addition that I like. I think it could be incorporated better though.4. I think of Bowling Green when I see this concept.5. The eye still looks funny.Good job so far, I do like the name and feel like once you get a good design- it could be vectored into a sharp logo.What is bowling green? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
penguin20 Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 A few things:1. The entire head of the bird seems large in comparison to the beak..I would look for a way to size it down.2. The striping pattern going across the head and down the front looks odd and out of place- what is its purpose?3. The bolt across the top of the head is a pretty unique addition that I like. I think it could be incorporated better though.4. I think of Bowling Green when I see this concept.5. The eye still looks funny.Good job so far, I do like the name and feel like once you get a good design- it could be vectored into a sharp logo.What is bowling green?A university, their mascot is a falcon btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 I have made a new logo - hope this is the final one. Big improvement from the last. Will try to post tonight - having toubles with my scanner.....Taylor_27 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 16, 2008 Share Posted November 16, 2008 Sorry I havn't posted the new logo yet. My stupid scanner......Try and fix today. Possibly final logo.Taylor_27 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 Sorry everybody for the wait - I am so mad........I want to show you all my logo! Hopefully soon it will be on.............Taylor_27 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Fixed scanner!!!!!! Will be able to post possible final logo tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 The Final Product: C&C Please!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted November 22, 2008 Author Share Posted November 22, 2008 Nice job here Taylor, crazy difference from your first one.Top notch work here bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 The bottom half of the logo looks sleek and overall nice, but the top of it is overdesigned, too detailed. The lightning bolt doesn't fit, and the jagged edges contrast with the smooth edges of the top of the head. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 Pretty good.I like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 Working on my t-shirt jeseys, turned out really good! Used transfer paper. Will post final result when finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ross_Shafer Posted November 24, 2008 Share Posted November 24, 2008 im diggin it so far... but i agree with the overdesigned part on the upper half of it... i personally would go with something much more simple... and me being bored, and not doing my homework tonight i decided to make my own. think about incorporating the lightning strike somewhere else in your design. Art Director at Lodge Design • Indianapolis, IN - - - - - - - - - - www.wechoosetogotothemoondesign.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 24, 2008 Share Posted November 24, 2008 Yours is pretty cool - I think maybe a little to simple for my taste Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted November 24, 2008 Author Share Posted November 24, 2008 im diggin it so far... but i agree with the overdesigned part on the upper half of it... i personally would go with something much more simple... and me being bored, and not doing my homework tonight i decided to make my own. think about incorporating the lightning strike somewhere else in your design.That is sick!Sorry taylor but that beats you bud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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