chestnutz Posted November 13, 2008 Author Share Posted November 13, 2008 Thanks for your input bucco.3rd page already?! Only one comment after the uniforms?! erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 I think as of right now, the black looks like an afterthought with the uniforms. All of the black occurs in places where green could have (and probably should have) been used. Also, there is a disconnect with the extreme detail of the logo and the extreme simplicity of the uniforms. This concept has some great pieces, but the pieces currently don't make a set. If you can bring the uniforms up to par with the primary logo, you will have something special. Also, I agree that J logo should be an NY, but if you keep it as a J, can you make it consistent with the J in the wordmark? That's been bothering me from the beginning of this concept. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 These uniforms are great!!! I love that helmet, the logo looks absolutely phenominal on a helmet. My favorite part is the pants stripe. I think it looks better on the pants than on the sleeves, but they look good on the sleeves too. Nice job!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted November 13, 2008 Author Share Posted November 13, 2008 Update 2:Added a NY alternate similar to the J logo. Looks pretty good IMO. Also made the NEW YORK text on the wordmark more spaced out, per brandon's suggestion.Uniforms: The general consensus was that there wasn't enough black, and I agree completely. The jet uses a lot of black, while the uniforms barely had any. So I added a thin black pipe on the side of the jersey that runs down along the pants, next to the pant jets. A black outline was added on the numbers as well, and the belt color was changed to black on the green pants. Subtle changes, but I believe they enhance the uniforms a great amount. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 Yep, the black does make them a little better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 The "NY" and "J" logos should match the rest of the logo set. You have them half filled in with a tiny black outline, while the rest of the logo set has a bold use of black. Try using the swoop from inside the wordmark for the two-tone of the letters. As it stand right now, they do not match the wordmark at all. On the bright side, the uniforms are much better. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stumpygremlin Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 I'd also say that the green curve in the wordmark should also be the same on the NY and J logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted November 13, 2008 Author Share Posted November 13, 2008 Because the wordmark is longer than the monograms, it's very hard to make the same curve and have it look good.But I did a quick update, the original update is now changed.The top half of the monogram logos is now the dark green instead of white, and are curved instead of straight.So tell me what you think. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 I don't think it's showing up. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gingerbreadmann Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 Yeah I'm with the others in that I don't get the highlight on the secondary logos (and the outline needs to be THICKER!) and to be honest, I don't like black in the uniforms at all. This is basically a homer analogy I know but there is tons of black in the Boston college logo while on the new uniforms black is reduced to almost nothing, most prominently a barely-noticeable (which I didn't even know existed until after they had been there for a year) pant stripe. I think you would be well served to go in this direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 I've already posted that I thought the helmet logo was too detailed. I'll reiterate it now because from a distance, the logo turns into a on-color silhouette. And the silhouette's detail really loses the logos character. Plus, the uniforms seems almost understated compared to the helmet logo. Less detail and a stronger silhouette would do wonders for this set. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brandon11 Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 Update 2:Added a NY alternate similar to the J logo. Looks pretty good IMO. Also made the NEW YORK text on the wordmark more spaced out, per brandon's suggestion.Uniforms: The general consensus was that there wasn't enough black, and I agree completely. The jet uses a lot of black, while the uniforms barely had any. So I added a thin black pipe on the side of the jersey that runs down along the pants, next to the pant jets. A black outline was added on the numbers as well, and the belt color was changed to black on the green pants. Subtle changes, but I believe they enhance the uniforms a great amount.I like the uniforms, the pinstripe down the top of the helmet definitely adds to it. brandonjbrown Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchie Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 Overall very solid concept!Not a big fan of the Arrow stripe, both on pant leg and shoulder.Love the airplane, on the first logo, I would actually bring the plane in front of the wordmark (top layer) @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 E-mail the Jets about this NOW! This is amazing! trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor_27 Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 Great job - really creative. The logo is very bold and clean - nicely done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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