logoman Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 So, I have been working on some updates for a few teams in the AA here, and I kind of got carried away. I was in a baseball mood and came up with a few options I wanted to expand upon. I used Bulldogs because I like the idea of taking a somewhat generic name, (Wildcats, Panthers, Stars, etc.) and creating a very good identity for them. Hopefully, I have done that with this one. I got the idea from Glenn's AA team - the Boston Bulldogs. I chose Scranton because I heard someone say that Joe Biden was, "Exactly the bulldog we need" after he was selected by Obama as VP. Also, I chose it because it sounds like the old football team- the Canton Bulldogs. With that, it's seems to be quite easy to remember.Anyway, let me know what you think.Here is a revised version with some of your suggestions included. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 How about the Scranton Dwights? JKIt's a good concept overall here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 I really think its a solid concept. I wish I had the talent to design my own logos. And one thing that stood out to me is that the bottom of the bats are like bones and that little touch really makes it great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 Great font choice for this. Like the bats/bones idea, too. I'd never seen that before.On the face, the mouth doesn't seem quite wide enough for a bulldog. I can't figure out if it's the mouth or the muzzle-or both that need it. Anyway, I like it! cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 It's a good start. But something about the face is off. Also I like the idea with the Bone/Bats. I think it would look better if one bat was completly a bone, and the end of the bat, was really a knob of the bat. @MichaelDanger19Â | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O_Town_Clown Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 It's a good start. But something about the face is off. Also I like the idea with the Bone/Bats. I think it would look better if one bat was completly a bone, and the end of the bat, was really a knob of the bat.My concern about the face is that you were going for "angry", and you ended up with "mildly irritated". Perhaps if you exaggerate the expression a bit, it will appear more aggressive.Apart from that, I like the simplicity of the design and, as with your other concepts, the execution is top notch. Sig by TalktoChuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logoman Posted December 24, 2008 Author Share Posted December 24, 2008 Actually, I did struggle with the face. I went from very angry to almost smiling and settled for "mildly irritated". I figured for a minor league team, that would be good for both adults and kids. ( It's all about merchandise). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 I have one little suggestion.It seems the way the lines are around his nose and mouth, that his snout sticks out quite a bit, unlike most bulldogs. So I suggest bringing his cheeks or whatever you would call them in front/overlapping the snout lines. Hope that makes sense. Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 It's a good start. But something about the face is off. Also I like the idea with the Bone/Bats. I think it would look better if one bat was completly a bone, and the end of the bat, was really a knob of the bat.My concern about the face is that you were going for "angry", and you ended up with "mildly irritated". Perhaps if you exaggerate the expression a bit, it will appear more aggressive.Apart from that, I like the simplicity of the design and, as with your other concepts, the execution is top notch.Maybe try making it look like its baring its teeth? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logoman Posted December 24, 2008 Author Share Posted December 24, 2008 Updated logo now included in first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 Updated logo now included in first post.Updated logo is pretty much perfect. I have nothing bad to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 I think this is great for minor league baseball. the bone on the bat knob is genious, and I now that I see it I cant believe its never been done before to my knowledge. I wouldn't change one bat to being a complete bone like was suggested above. I think that would throw off the symmetry of the whole logo. I do like the one tooth coming out of the mouth and the cartoonish "tic-tac-toe" scratch mark on the left of his face. I like how you didnt over-do the meanness in his face. Seems perfect for a minor league team DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O_Town_Clown Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 The protruding tooth was a very slick way of making him appear more aggressive without resorting to the gnashed teeth cliche. I think the new logo is a winner. Great job! Sig by TalktoChuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spamspamspamspam Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 I really like the Bone-bats, but I think it should be the Scranton/Wilkes-Barre Bulldogs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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