Dave Ship Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 Quick fact:- new color scheme, sort of updated vintage;- new font;- asymmetric design. My PicturesMy Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAK47 Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 Really not feeling it, needs more than two colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logocruncher Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 I like the presentation, and the basic design is okay, but the gray has got to go. Also, the front number is way too small. Try changing the number font to match the WARRIORS wordmark. Maybe some of the lighter blue on the white jersey would help, as well. Nice job, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 I am shocked. This is the first time I haven't 99% liked one of your concepts. I think it may be the colors, they don't pop. If you were to use these colors I would include the lighter blue found on the warrior in the logo. 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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TC Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 Wow, I think this one's better. Nice! The navy looks a lot better and I noticed there are some other changes. 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 the newest one looks better...the only thing bothering me in the numbers on the front. They should be bigger and placed to the right more, under the script, where itd balance out perfectly... ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old School Fool Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 just make the wordmark and numbers like the current warriors jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Ship Posted December 28, 2008 Author Share Posted December 28, 2008 just make the wordmark and numbers like the current warriors jersey.Right, uhm, I grab the wordmark from Chris' site.Thanks to all of you for the comments. I'll work out with that font. My PicturesMy Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
incrediballer Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 The numbers on the front is too small. And I think the shade of yellow used is lousy. The new ones were nice and I was impressed by the striping.Great job but needs minimal changes. LakeshowFight On!Carpe DiemNo Fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAK47 Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 Better, I still think the numbers need to be bigger on the front, also once again, it needs a third color to make it pop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Ship Posted December 28, 2008 Author Share Posted December 28, 2008 Better, I still think the numbers need to be bigger on the front, also once again, it needs a third color to make it pop.I may agree about the font size but then you've 4 (as you can see from the four little circles on the left on side of the layout) different colors: Navy Blue, Baby Blue, Yellow and White. I just want to finally understand what you mean about the needed of a fifth color into the scheme.// update- I tweaked out the font shape My PicturesMy Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
incrediballer Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 Better, I still think the numbers need to be bigger on the front, also once again, it needs a third color to make it pop.I may agree about the font size but then you've 4 (as you can see from the four little circles on the left on side of the layout) different colors: Navy Blue, Baby Blue, Yellow and White. I just want to finally understand what you mean about the needed of a fifth color into the scheme.// update- I tweaked out the font shapeI think the colors are fine now. No need to add another one.Great adjustment on the numbers. LakeshowFight On!Carpe DiemNo Fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAK47 Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 Better, I still think the numbers need to be bigger on the front, also once again, it needs a third color to make it pop.I may agree about the font size but then you've 4 (as you can see from the four little circles on the left on side of the layout) different colors: Navy Blue, Baby Blue, Yellow and White. I just want to finally understand what you mean about the needed of a fifth color into the scheme.// update- I tweaked out the font shapeWhite isn't really a color, also two blues is good, I'm talking about a completely different color. Right now it looks too bland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 Might need a brighter yellow. The shade you have now is too close to butter rather than yellow, I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Ship Posted December 28, 2008 Author Share Posted December 28, 2008 EDIT. yeah, ok, great comments. My PicturesMy Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinsTerritory Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 Not bad, but I really like them with some Orange. Twins-Territory.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jussten Posted December 29, 2008 Share Posted December 29, 2008 Quick fact:- new color scheme, sort of updated vintage;- new font;- asymmetric design.Looks like the Wizards to me, I like the concept if you tweeked the colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted December 29, 2008 Share Posted December 29, 2008 Quick fact:- new color scheme, sort of updated vintage;- new font;- asymmetric design.(Picture Removed)Looks like the Wizards to me, I like the concept if you tweeked the colors.It's amazing what you'll see If you look at more than the first post. My Site | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jussten Posted December 29, 2008 Share Posted December 29, 2008 Quick fact:- new color scheme, sort of updated vintage;- new font;- asymmetric design.(Picture Removed)Looks like the Wizards to me, I like the concept if you tweeked the colors.It's amazing what you'll see If you look at more than the first post.Yeah I saw the darker blue, but still think the gold needs changing, the home jersey would still look like the wiz, I do like it, but the colors are still too similar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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