Throwback Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 A few months ago I posted a high school football concept. I didn't get much feedback and didn't get to refine the idea. These ideas and concepts are the fourth iteration that I've made made and I'm dubbing them board-worthy:So without further digression,LogosFootball HomeFootball RoadFootball FieldFootball ActionBasketball RoadBasketball HomeLady's Basketball HomeLady's Basketball RoadBaseball UniformsBaseball Action I will do other sports. C+C please(I'm serious about this one) ~?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O_Town_Clown Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 With all do respect, the tornado logo looks like half a banana. Worse yet, it appears that you created it in paint in about ten minutes. If I'm wrong about that I apologize, but that's how it looks to me.You need to make eyes that aren't so geometric, and you need to convey a sense of circular motion. Also, is that black spot a nose or a mouth? Sig by TalktoChuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logocruncher Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 I like the basic design itself, and the K and GT logos are nice enough, but that logo... it doesn't even vaguely look like a tornado. Maybe make it a little more sleek, with swirly lines or something, and change up those eyes. Just add some variety... Make it a little more like this, and you're set.http://eteamz.active.com/matornadoesaauorg.../tTornadoes.pngDecent work, just make that logo better and you're set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAK47 Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 Logo definitely needs some work, also I don't know why you decided to put shoulder numbers on only one shoulder, that is kinda weird and needs to be scrapped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Throwback Posted January 11, 2009 Author Share Posted January 11, 2009 TheAK47: I was just taking some artistic licence, if I were, by some miracle, to perdue making this concept, well... not a concept that would probably be changed- for financial reasonslogocruncher: That logo is amazing I'll try something like that.wbachmann: It''s a mouth. ~?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Throwback Posted January 13, 2009 Author Share Posted January 13, 2009 BUMPI've got a logo I'm kind of comfortable with just need to get it digitized. ~?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logoman Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 It's a Tornana or a Banado! Seriously, the first thing I saw was half a banana. It needs some circular motion to mimic the look of a tornado. You are on the right track, just refine it a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 I would love to see the new logo, since bananas and tornadoes have nothing to do with each other. 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamikel Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 The uniform looks pretty good, but the logo is a big downgrade. A tornado shouldn't look so solid, and it has a very strange expression, like it just got punched in the stomach. But with a name like Keyser, the mascot really should be the Sozes. Perhaps with a gold lighter for the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Throwback Posted January 13, 2009 Author Share Posted January 13, 2009 The uniform looks pretty good, but the logo is a big downgrade. A tornado shouldn't look so solid, and it has a very strange expression, like it just got punched in the stomach. But with a name like Keyser, the mascot really should be the Sozes. Perhaps with a gold lighter for the logo.How'd you know my name!!!I remember several years ago we were knocked out of the playoffs by Polka, West Virginia's finest... ...the Dots ~?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Cunningham Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 The uniform looks pretty good, but the logo is a big downgrade. A tornado shouldn't look so solid, and it has a very strange expression, like it just got punched in the stomach. But with a name like Keyser, the mascot really should be the Sozes. Perhaps with a gold lighter for the logo.How'd you know my name!!!I remember several years ago we were knocked out of the playoffs by Polka, West Virginia's finest... ...the DotsActually, the Dots hail from Poca, WV. The uniforms are a bit too modern for me, but for what they are (a modern uniform) they are well put together. I do like the gold facemask on the helmet. (I don't particularly care for dark helmets with matching dark facemasks.)As for the logos, a modernization of the current twister/tornado logo would work much better I believe. I like the fact that the current one is smiling/smirking. That, and it has several curves to it. (It's more dynamic.) As others have stated, it looks like your version just got the wind knocked out of it. (Would that mean that it got itself knocked out of itself then? Tornadoes are just wind, right?) It also seems very rigid. Also, I like the interlocked GT logo and the typeface you used for your wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Throwback Posted January 13, 2009 Author Share Posted January 13, 2009 Thanks to all of the C+C so far I've sketched and photographed several new logos that i think will be more dynamic, the face I've kept the same (our compromise) bot the shading seems more alive. Ill decide which one to digitize and digitize it Based on your feedback (any charitable being would be welcomed to digitize themselves if they'd like)ABCDEFG ~?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O_Town_Clown Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 Thanks to all of the C+C so far I've sketched and photographed several new logos that i think will be more dynamic, the face I've kept the same (our compromise) bot the shading seems more alive. Ill decide which one to digitize and digitize it Based on your feedback (any charitable being would be welcomed to digitize their self if they'd like)ABCDEFG"A" is your winner...I guess. Good job getting rid of that vertical line. You'll definitely need to have some swirling motion lines inside the cone to keep it from looking like a flat top.I really want to reiterate, though, that the face needs a lot of work and is going to keep this from being a quality concept even when you update. Sig by TalktoChuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Throwback Posted January 14, 2009 Author Share Posted January 14, 2009 Thanks to all of the C+C so far I've sketched and photographed several new logos that i think will be more dynamic, the face I've kept the same (our compromise) bot the shading seems more alive. Ill decide which one to digitize and digitize it Based on your feedback (any charitable being would be welcomed to digitize their self if they'd like)ABCDEFG"A" is your winner...I guess. Good job getting rid of that vertical line. You'll definitely need to have some swirling motion lines inside the cone to keep it from looking like a flat top.I really want to reiterate, though, that the face needs a lot of work and is going to keep this from being a quality concept even when you update.If it runs out to be a major problem I'll change the eyes, I'm still a little attached. As for now-- once I digitize the logo, I'll mve on to basketball. Does anyone have any other sketch preferances, I'm partial to B. ~?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted January 14, 2009 Share Posted January 14, 2009 You have to change the eyes and mouth for this to look good. It looks like one of those Japanese comic book drawings. 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted January 14, 2009 Share Posted January 14, 2009 It looks like a up banana, with eyes and a mouth. Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StPatty33 Posted January 14, 2009 Share Posted January 14, 2009 I say the original (the logo you're trying to replace) is still the best of all.In my opinion yours is currently too one-dimensional. A tornado should have wisps and cows flying about (lol). Seriously though, the eyes and mouth are not doing it for me, though they look best in choice G of your drawings. Maybe something a little less abstract? Similar to the eyes and mouth of the ice cream cone in this logo I did back in the day:Right now it looks like a lopped off bullhorn or banana. Wispy. WISPY! The below to be updated once the newest banner is raised! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Throwback Posted January 14, 2009 Author Share Posted January 14, 2009 I used a new face and added some lines and a line to add Dynamics.C+C please ~?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fkaKrock5cent Posted January 14, 2009 Share Posted January 14, 2009 What if you did away with the face all-together? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StPatty33 Posted January 14, 2009 Share Posted January 14, 2009 Better!The top still needs to be jagged or swirly in my opinion--still looks chopped off. Definitely moving in the right direction though! The below to be updated once the newest banner is raised! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.