JamieRose Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 I figured now was as good of a time as any to get some feedback on my new logo that I'm working on. Firstly, i feel I should show the logos that I've gone through to show where I've come.Version 1.0: Statik DesignsCan't say that I'm too proud of this one. I made it a few years ago when I had a bit of an obsession with rendering planets in Photoshop. I also decided to use a Metallica font for the Statik, and Pretendo for the Designs.Version 2.0: Nutini DesignsLooking back it reminds me of Ritz Crackers.Version 3.0:The first step toward simplicity. I had this idea while taking an English exam back in high school. The idea was like the letter "n" within a bubble of thought.Version 3.1:Same idea only vectorized. This is what I've been using over the past couple of months.Now, I whipped up a new idea taking elements from the past couple. I wanted to incorporate the N back into the circle, as opposed to having them as two separate elements. I kind of put the letter N inside the @ symbol. Well blah blah enough talking, here's what I've come up with.I like what I have, but I'd like some advice on how to take it to the next level. Then I want to get some help on making a new uniform display template, but that's another story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted January 28, 2009 Author Share Posted January 28, 2009 Had a quick idea.make it look like "jn" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 love the jn logo. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 I like your new design. It is simple and would look good as a watermark as well as a main logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-(dp)- Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 I saw it as a jn before you added the dot. I really think the dot is unnecessary. The dot seems to clutter it up a little, or make it seem out of balance, in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottysprings Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 I saw it as a jn before you added the dot. I really think the dot is unnecessary. The dot seems to clutter it up a little, or make it seem of balance, in my opinion.Agreed, the dot makes it look overdone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burgundy Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 I like it, but the dot is out of place, it almost looks like an h. Instead, try splitting the stem of the n where the curved part meets the vertical part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phlash Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 you said it yourself that simple is typically better, and in this case I think the dot may be un-needed. but i was curious, what thread is your signature referring too? I'm assuming spammy but I'm not sure about the other. Not that I don't like the kid I just find his progression from board laughinstock to valued poster interesting, and I'd love to read another chapter of it. If its not that important than oh well no big deal. Don't want to take away from the discussion of you logo either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tBBP Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 I hate how all y'all got names that lend themselves well to the name of a brand. That said...I'm liking the little circular logo thing going on there. Lose the dot, though--it does add clutter.It kinda has that "@" feel to it, which is something I like (don't know if that's where you got the idea, but it works nonetheless). *Disclaimer: I am not an authoritative expert on stuff...I just do a lot of reading and research and keep in close connect with a bunch of people who are authoritative experts on stuff. || dribbble || Behance || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted January 28, 2009 Author Share Posted January 28, 2009 Okay, the consider the dot gone. (I'm not at home so refer to the post before it)but i was curious, what thread is your signature referring too? I'm assuming spammy but I'm not sure about the other.The other would be Mr. Beastly who was actually.... You know what, you can read the thrilling tale HERE!!Anyway, back on topic, are there any major changes you think I could make, or is it pretty good on its own? The end of the circle is bothering me just a bit.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 If you are referring to the end right there where it otherwise would connect with the j, yea, I was kinda looking at that too. I'm not sure how you could change it to make it better though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted January 29, 2009 Author Share Posted January 29, 2009 Quick update.Made green color scheme.No more dot.I think when its colored the little oddness at the end stands out much less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted January 29, 2009 Author Share Posted January 29, 2009 Another quickie. This could be a banner or sig-like apparatus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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