PhilliesPhan1325 Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 I made this logo in paint awhile ago and I just stumbled upon it. I had made it in colors close to the Coyotes so I decided to see how it would work as an alternate jersey. Your thoughts? "The 0-2 pitch... SWING AND A MISS! STRUCK HIM OUT! THE PHILADELPHIA PHILLIES ARE 2008 WORLD CHAMPIONS OF BASEBALL!" J M yoU wish you had a Duke Dog! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 I don't know why but something about the face is bugging me. Maybe its too wide, because if you look at their primary, it doesn't look that fat. You could also try doing something to make it look less...... cartoony i guess. Another thing that is bothering me is that hair below his mouth, makes it look like he has a goatee or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 ^Yes, I agree, it's very minor league and contrasts greatly with the sleeker coyote seen in the primary logo. Also, I wouldn't really call this a completed concept, looks like you just took the logo and slapped it on the alt template rather than take the time to make a new striping design. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burgundy Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 The logo's too pudgy. The face needs to be slimmer, and there needs to be more points and less roundness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 Nice job. Great logo. I like it. It might be a little too cartoony though. Otherwise, great job! https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krilow Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 I like the logo,I think it would make a better shoulder patch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 I think if you tidy it up and make it less round, it's a winner. Too cartoony right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 I think it looks like a fat Wile E. Coyote or a wolf. Either one lol. Its a good logo, just needs some fine tuning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 I'd call this an illustration, and far from a logo. However, its pretty good for an illustration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 This is not a bad logo. It might be a little cartoonish for the NHL, but I like how it looks. It also looks nice on the sweater. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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