lancebridwell Posted July 3, 2010 Share Posted July 3, 2010 Now before I post the jerseys, I would like to know which one looks better.Ver. #1Ver. #2The bandanna has been bothering me extensively, and I would love some help deciding which one looks better. I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted July 3, 2010 Share Posted July 3, 2010 I can't see version 2 Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted July 3, 2010 Author Share Posted July 3, 2010 Better?If not, here's the direct link.http://tinypic.com/r/10hrqy8/6 I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rdsx246 Posted July 3, 2010 Share Posted July 3, 2010 I think version 2 is better, version 1 kinda looks like a beak. Otherwise, I think that both logos are squished, you should make the dimensions taller. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted July 3, 2010 Author Share Posted July 3, 2010 That was EXACTLY what I was thinking with V1. But I was trying to go with a sleek look, but I'll try making it taller and seeing how it comes out. I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted July 3, 2010 Share Posted July 3, 2010 Yeah I can see them now, and I like V2 better also. Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted July 3, 2010 Share Posted July 3, 2010 #2 https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted July 3, 2010 Author Share Posted July 3, 2010 Tampa Bay Bandits (Southeast Division)Primary and Alternate logosHomeAwayAlt I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerBadger Posted July 3, 2010 Share Posted July 3, 2010 Tampa Bay Bandits (Southeast Division)Primary and Alternate logosHomeAwayAltWhite side stripes like the away and alt jerseys have look bad. (They stretch and make the player look fat.)Alt > away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted July 3, 2010 Author Share Posted July 3, 2010 Any suggestions as to what color to replace them with? I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerBadger Posted July 3, 2010 Share Posted July 3, 2010 Any suggestions as to what color to replace them with?The shoulder color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted July 3, 2010 Share Posted July 3, 2010 I'm not a fan of the white names and numbers on the white jerseys. What if you made them red/silver/black? That might look much better. Otherwise, nice start. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted July 4, 2010 Author Share Posted July 4, 2010 Thanks for the suggestions, I'll work on the away/home script. Any comments on the logos themselves? I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted July 4, 2010 Share Posted July 4, 2010 I think they're honestly a bit too wide. I dunno if you were doing that stylistically, but the human head is alot more vertical than horizontal. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted July 4, 2010 Author Share Posted July 4, 2010 Yeah it wasn't really supposed to be modeled off of a human. But thanks for the input! I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
9erssteve Posted July 4, 2010 Share Posted July 4, 2010 Tampa Bay Bandits (Southeast Division)Primary and Alternate logosI'l be honest I thought version one of the primary logo had far more potential than version two, which you've gone with. Yes it needed a little work to prevent the "beak" issue but the shading/stylising on it was far more realistic and far more eloquent than the two random triangles you've dropped on in version two to indicate shading. Which quite frankly have little or no bearing on reality and as a result add nothing to the design, imo you'd be better off without them.The alt logo suffers the same problem the shading on the bandana bas just been placed randomly on one side and then mirrored to the other that would never happen in reality and as such gives the impression that little thought or consideration has been given to that part of the design. The hat on the alt without being personal is terrible. It completely contradicts reality and your primary logo wich is actually very accurate. To see what I mean make both logos the same height then align them next to one another and draw horizontal lines from the top of the hat the highest points where the sides roll up and from the tip and the brim of the hat. ALL these locations should match up EXACTLY in the alt logo as all it is is the same character from the front, but if you do it you'll see the number of ways that the two hats vary wildly from one another.I'd also look at swapping the fonts over on the wordmark as well, you've used the font with the finest detail for the smallest text and the smoother more flowing script text which would be more legible at a smaller size for the main name.I dont have an issue with the whole vertical/horizontal ratio thing I think that part of the stylisation works really well, and adds a bit of implied speed and movement to what could be an otherwise pretty static looking design if drawn to accurate proportions, so stick with that but there are other areas of the logo that need work in order to get the best out of it.Look forward to seeing the progression.9erssteve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigKwell Posted July 9, 2010 Share Posted July 9, 2010 Tampa Bay Bandits (Southeast Division)Primary and Alternate logosHomeAwayAltLooks a little too much like the logo of the defunct Ottawa Renegades of the CFL. "Beer is proof God loves us and wants us to be happy." Benjamin Franklin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigKwell Posted July 11, 2010 Share Posted July 11, 2010 Got some teams to suggest to you:Boston/New Orleans/Portland BreakersNew Jersey GeneralsLos Angeles ExpressChicago BlitzMemphis ShowboatsHouston Gamblers Jacksonville BullsWashington FederalsDenver GoldPhiladelphia StarsMichigan Panthers "Beer is proof God loves us and wants us to be happy." Benjamin Franklin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerBadger Posted July 11, 2010 Share Posted July 11, 2010 Got some teams to suggest to you:Boston/New Orleans/Portland BreakersNew Jersey GeneralsLos Angeles ExpressChicago BlitzMemphis ShowboatsHouston Gamblers Jacksonville BullsWashington FederalsDenver GoldPhiladelphia StarsMichigan PanthersWhat? No Arizona Gamblers? The Gamblers' second-season unis and the Panthers' unis were the best in the USFL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted July 14, 2010 Author Share Posted July 14, 2010 UPDATE: I updated pretty much everything. PrimaryAlt.HomeAwayHelmetC&C? I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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