JackFr Posted October 11, 2010 Share Posted October 11, 2010 I decided on a winter motif on this one. I think it turned out pretty good. I want to improve it though, so please critique.C&C please My NHL Rebrand BlogCheck it out and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted October 11, 2010 Share Posted October 11, 2010 The idea for the logo is there, and it looks ok, but its pretty sloppy to be honest. Just get rid of some stuff in there, particularly the face, and just make some lines thicker, and get rid of the unnecessary ones. It's a pretty good start though. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted October 11, 2010 Share Posted October 11, 2010 Yeah, I like the idea for sure, I love the color scheme. What I think you need to add a lot more detail to those paws though. Perhaps show the lynx with his claws out like he's pouncing at something. Right now they kinda look like a de-clawed cat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackFr Posted October 11, 2010 Author Share Posted October 11, 2010 First update. My NHL Rebrand BlogCheck it out and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackFr Posted October 11, 2010 Author Share Posted October 11, 2010 Bump? I could really use whatever advice I can get. My NHL Rebrand BlogCheck it out and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A-Train Posted October 11, 2010 Share Posted October 11, 2010 Did you do a live trace? Because the lines aren't smooth enough to be a logo.. It just looks like an illustration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS85 Posted October 11, 2010 Share Posted October 11, 2010 The jersey template? Solid as hell. The logo's execution is lacking. The cat is sort of dangling out of the circle frame, and the proportions are a bit off. Not sure what to suggest there. I would maybe simplify. Quote "You are nothing more than a small cancer on this message board. You are not entertaining, you are a complete joke." twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Edubdesign Posted October 11, 2010 Share Posted October 11, 2010 I'd say you could probably just get away with using the head as the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackFr Posted October 12, 2010 Author Share Posted October 12, 2010 I'd say you could probably just get away with using the head as the logo.Yeah I was thinking that. Here's an update. My NHL Rebrand BlogCheck it out and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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