Phitin Posted October 31, 2010 Share Posted October 31, 2010 Not bad, there's a few things I would look into changing though:-The gray outline on the bird could be fixed up a little on the tail by just making one curved line instead of having those "bumps."-The eye bugs me; it kind of looks like the bird has a surprised look and has his eye wide open.-The winged 'O' looks very forced. One suggestion I have is to make the 'O' in cursive and have the wing come off of the swoop at the top. Or just find a better way to integrate it without compromising readability. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted October 31, 2010 Share Posted October 31, 2010 I don't like the green stripe down the Osprey's jersey that much. Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted November 1, 2010 Author Share Posted November 1, 2010 bump... any more feedback? dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted December 12, 2010 Author Share Posted December 12, 2010 Alright, so heres the next team, the Canmore Bears. I wanted to get this up again, so I went with the Bear head logo ive been working on. I made a couple changes to it as recommended in the other thread, as well as changing the green to a maroon color. For the secondary, I went with a simple bear paw, and for the Cap logo I went with a B in the style of the wordmarks.The jerseys are fairly simple, I went with a vest for both the home/away, and something a bit different for the alternate. After this one, i'll probably go back and do a round of updates before putting up a new one. What do you guys think? dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skier14 Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 That logo set turned out great!Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted December 13, 2010 Author Share Posted December 13, 2010 Anything else? dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ink Posted December 13, 2010 Share Posted December 13, 2010 i think the alternate logo would look better on all the hats, and maybe add the primary as a patch on the sleeves Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 Add the paw on the sleeves for the home and away, and make the cap logo the bear. And put the bear on the sleeve of the alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 15, 2010 Share Posted December 15, 2010 Im just seeing this league for the first time. I like most of the teams youve made here. I like the bear claw on that hat. i think it's a nie change of pace from the typcial letters on caps and it's simple enough to fit nicely on the cap. i like the improvements you made to the bear logo since seeing it on your other postThe only thing I would say about these logos is that they dont have many elements of the sports in the logos. They dont really look like baseball logos, more like football logos. this really doesnt matter though since it is your league and you dont have to follow conventional baseball logos. in a way, that's the beauty of doing your own leagues. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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