frankiebridges Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 Just a concept I came up with for my local basketball team. Bit of an outrageous name to work with, but all in good fun. The colour scheme has not yet been decided by the guys, I just threw it together quickly for preview purposes. Still cleaning up lines etc, but you get the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 IT's good. You do need to clean up the lines, but there is a line between his eye and his chin (a thick, black line), & I'm not sure if that's intentional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigi Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 IT's good. You do need to clean up the lines, but there is a line between his eye and his chin (a thick, black line), & I'm not sure if that's intentional.the sideburns? My fantasy teams: West Coast Cardinals (WRU), Glasgow Claymores (RLI) (Champions 2012) and Pemberton Foresters (VBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frankiebridges Posted March 17, 2011 Author Share Posted March 17, 2011 IT's good. You do need to clean up the lines, but there is a line between his eye and his chin (a thick, black line), & I'm not sure if that's intentional.the sideburns?I had to reread the first comment, I thought you were talking about the line demonstrating chin protrusion, but in fact you were talking about the moustache! It completes the trifecta with the top hat and monocle. I could possibly twirl it a little more to make it more 'mo' like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 I think he's talking about what's supposed to be the chain on the monocle. It makes sense to me, but it could probably be done without and still make just as much visual sense to the audience.Otherwise, very sharp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frankiebridges Posted March 17, 2011 Author Share Posted March 17, 2011 Ahhh yes of course. You're definitely right, I was a bit skeptical putting it in to begin with, but fresh eyes have confirmed it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 I love everything about this logo. Excellent work. Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadFish Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 I didn't get moustache from first look either, so that could be tweaked.I do get the monocle chain, but it might not be needed.With or without theses changes I like it a lot, I especially adore how effective the crease in the hat comes off. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frankiebridges Posted March 18, 2011 Author Share Posted March 18, 2011 Thanks guys, your feedback is much appreciated! I'll make some changes and repost soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 i like it! i know that's not much C&C but it's good. maybe moving the string of the monocle so it doesnt cover the teeth would improve it but this is very good. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pianoknight Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 The team name is "meh," but that's not your fault. This would be a perfect logo for a team named the "Barons," because I instantly think of an old-timey oil/steel/railroad tycoon.Heck, this could even work for teams like Wake Forest, or even Purdue since it could have some railroad-ish undertones.Very nice. 5th in NAT. TITLES | 2nd in CONF. TITLES | 5th in HEISMAN | 7th in DRAFTS | 8th in ALL-AMER | 7th in WINS | 4th in BOWLS | 1st in SELLOUTS | 1st GAMEDAY SIGN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frankiebridges Posted March 18, 2011 Author Share Posted March 18, 2011 The team name is "meh," but that's not your fault. This would be a perfect logo for a team named the "Barons," because I instantly think of an old-timey oil/steel/railroad tycoon.Heck, this could even work for teams like Wake Forest, or even Purdue since it could have some railroad-ish undertones.Very nice.Thats definitely the vibe I was going for so I'm glad you received it that way. As for the team name, it was just thrown together with no real thought of logos or personalised uniforms. I certainly agree with the railroad undertones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdAstraKC Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 I love this all over. I even like the team name for the context. I would get rid of the monocle chain, other than that I think it's awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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