untvar Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Hi Guys, this concept is 90% finished. (Logo will be shrunk down to fit on the center panel.) I'm happy with the logo, but struggling badly with the word-mark: placement, size, detail. Here's 3 options. Which do you like best? Do you have any word-mark suggestions that would be better than these?123Any other C&C would be welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 My advice - ditch the wordmark (it's not necessary) and shrink the crest. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Nice logo and sweater.I like the third wordmark, but why not try it as a stand-alone secondary that settles in on the sleeve, right under the numbers at the elbow.I agree...the logo is good enough by itself, if adding a wordmark doesn't work. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTaylor44 Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 I would ditch the wordmark too, but if you want to keep it I would refine the top one. I would move the Grand Rapids out of the G and S and put it on top of the Griffins word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyrzee Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 I like your third option the best, the other two dont have enough red which makes the red numbers seem out of place, the first two would look better with blue numbers probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
texfischer Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 No wordmark, and a little more red and this will be much improved. I do really like the logo, great work on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 The logo is cool, but the wings seem a little too robotic for my taste. I know everyone is more discriminating when it's their team, but they don't really fit the Griffin theme. Maybe it's the silver, or the fact that they are so straight and rigid. I just don't like how they fit the rest of the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
untvar Posted July 26, 2011 Author Share Posted July 26, 2011 Thanx for the comments. Ok, so here are the suggestions so far:a. move 'grand rapids' off 'GriffinS'b. tried to make the composition more compactc. tried to soften the metallic looking wings by switching white and greyd. moved word-mark to sleeves456Do any of those pop out at you as "That's the one"? Any other ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 #6 looks great. I really like the script on the sleeves, it's not something used very often, and since you seem to really want to put a script logo on your jersey, it works out good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 #6 is a real nice looking unit untvar.Good Luck! *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 everyone said to get of the wordmark and the only one you did that was with no. 6... so thats the pick THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 You cant read the wordmark because the FIN is behind the legs. The wordmark isnt necessary. If you really want a wordmark, put it on top straight across, but that would make this already tall logo even taller. The rendering of the Griffin itself is pretty good, but it's hard to tell since it's so small. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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