Moseph Posted July 29, 2011 Share Posted July 29, 2011 I wanted to make an alternate logo for my city, more of a wordmark type design. What do you guys think?I updated it today, you can see the new logo in post 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted July 29, 2011 Share Posted July 29, 2011 Sorry, not a fan. If it's a logo for the city, then the city's name should be emphasized and should be the focal point. Here, you've made the C in "City of" the dominant element with some pretty shameless use of the Colts' turned sideways and squished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vazquez Posted July 31, 2011 Share Posted July 31, 2011 I wanted to make an alternate logo for my city, more of a wordmark type design. What do you guys think?I really want to tell you positive things, but lets get the knocking of the negative, its using a manipulated current logo, the font is very not unique, and the way you have it would do no matters as a success.Although from this I do see some positive, I am assuming Bowie has a relation to horses, or colts and you can emphasize your own horse shoe as a the backdrop and work on a way to place the typography. Behance | Clothing Line Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Moseph Posted August 1, 2011 Author Share Posted August 1, 2011 I'm sorry guys, I didn't realize you aren't supposed to edit existing logos. Bowie was a horse racing town, that is why I wanted to use the horshoe, but I guess it is back to the drawing board for now. Here is the current logo by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moseph Posted August 7, 2011 Author Share Posted August 7, 2011 I went and redid and I think made it a lot better. What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WizKid Posted August 8, 2011 Share Posted August 8, 2011 Wow i never knew bowie was a horse racing town. Shoot growing up, all I knew was Rosecroft down the road. GrizzlyBlack Designs, UDC Firebird Β Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WizKid Posted August 8, 2011 Share Posted August 8, 2011 I went and redid and I think made it a lot better. What do you guys think?Its perfect! Now only if i could make one for Ft Washington. GrizzlyBlack Designs, UDC Firebird Β Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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