Kevin W. Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 This is a similar idea to my hockey concept that I posted a while back, in that it's for a prospective fantasy team. In this case, it's for fantasy college baseball. Since (if and when the league starts) it's likely to be converted over to a better template by someone else, please ignore the fact that it's on such a basic template and critique the uniforms themselves.The university is the University of California, Oceanside Admirals. The colors are ocean boat blue, federal blue and sand. To answer your questions before you ask, yes I did deliberately take some cues from the Padres. It seemed logical after Jahgee gave me such a solid color scheme.As you can see, there are two alternates for home and road each.Critique away! Mighty Ducks of Anaheim (CHL - 2018 Orr Cup Champions) Chicago Rivermen (UBA/WBL - 2014, 2015, 2017 Intercontinental Cup Champions) King's Own Hexham FC (BIP - 2022 Saint's Cup Champions) Portland Explorers (EFL - Elite Bowl XIX Champions) Real San Diego (UPL) Red Bull Seattle (ULL - 2018, 2019, 2020 Gait Cup Champions) Vancouver Huskies (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thespleenenator Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 The concept isn't bad, it's supposed to be basic, but the template hurts my eyes. Why you make fun of me? I make concept for Auburn champions and you make fun of me. I cry tears.Chopping off the dicks of Filipino boys and embracing causes that promote bigotry =/= strong moral character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 Well, I have to make do with what I've got and what I've got is Paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 Try moving them to theseAnd thanks for the color scheme credit, I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 It's not about the template. You can clearly see the design details even on the limited template I used. I want critiques of the design itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 The Ocean Blue makes the Federal Blue look purple, I would add sand between the two blues. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 I would do away with the vests...especially the "Ocean Blue" one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 It's really hard to see small details with this template, don't use paint as an excuse because far better paint templates exist, also inkscape. And make an effort to finish your concepts at least a little more before posting, the least you could do would be to add numbers, nameplate, and some type of cap logo. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 It's really hard to see small details with this template, don't use paint as an excuse because far better paint templates exist, also inkscape. And make an effort to finish your concepts at least a little more before posting, the least you could do would be to add numbers, nameplate, and some type of cap logo.The logos are being worked on and I called it a "basic concept" for a reason. This is just to establish a baseline. I want an opinion of the overall design. The little details can be added later, but I want to know if I'm moving in the right direction first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 4, 2011 Share Posted August 4, 2011 Ok, screw it, I'm not going to learn Inkscape unless I try. Here's my first effort at learning by doing:I don't know how to do stripes, so the sleeve/collar stripes, the pinstripes on the home uniforms and the sock stripes will have to wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted August 4, 2011 Share Posted August 4, 2011 try invert the blue tones in 2nd kit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 4, 2011 Share Posted August 4, 2011 Once again, excuse the lack of striping/logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted August 4, 2011 Share Posted August 4, 2011 Kevin, Just an Idea.(Jersey/Pants)Home: White/White (OK)Road: Sand/Federal BlueAlternate 1: Vest Federal Blue with undershirt Ocean Blue/ White or SandAlternate 2: Ocean Blue With Federal Blue Pinstripes/ Federal Blue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 4, 2011 Share Posted August 4, 2011 Ok, I'm having some trouble with the pinstripe template, so for now the plain white will have to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 you really need logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 I'm finding that the lighter blue kinda looks like crap with the sand colour. The dark blue works with the sand and the light blue well separately, but I think you're going to have to go with one or the other. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 Kevin, why don't you show the uniforms that I sent you by EMail? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 I didn't get any emails from you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 You know what, I'm not liking the ocean boat blue vest anymore, so I decided to go in a different direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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