TimEOBrien Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 So I saw both Mcrosby's and raysox's take on this logo and I liked that they included garitas in their designs, but I figured that since soccer badges can be strange shapes and the shape of a garita can look a lot like a crest, why not make it the crest?I also noticed how the garita's window creates a nice clean 'I' only furthering my belief that I'm on the right track. This is still very much a work in progress, so C&C will lead to edits in the design.Here are all four bigger TL TR BL BR and then one without the wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymie Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 All four sorely need a color change on the wordmark for legibility. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthPollock Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 I see what you were trying to do, but I'm just not a fan of this. First I think there is too much of the sky blue and the wordmark is hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 There is a lot of dissonance between these two particular shades of light blue and orange, which is very strange to have with these two colours. It's affecting the legibility. But of the ones you have as is, the strongest is the upper right, it has the best balance of colour. Just play around with your palette some. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimEOBrien Posted July 19, 2012 Author Share Posted July 19, 2012 Any of these work better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimEOBrien Posted July 19, 2012 Author Share Posted July 19, 2012 Back to blue, are these better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthPollock Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 I actually like the colors in post #5. The problem I am having right now is the sides of the logo. I know it's the way it's shaped but it looks jagged. That's all I can focus on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimEOBrien Posted July 19, 2012 Author Share Posted July 19, 2012 I actually like the colors in post #5. The problem I am having right now is the sides of the logo. I know it's the way it's shaped but it looks jagged. That's all I can focus on.This may be counter to what your problem is, but I made the outlines and strokes around the edges cleaner. Now, that means sharper in some spots, so maybe that the opposite of what you want: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthPollock Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 I actually like the colors in post #5. The problem I am having right now is the sides of the logo. I know it's the way it's shaped but it looks jagged. That's all I can focus on.This may be counter to what your problem is, but I made the outlines and strokes around the edges cleaner. Now, that means sharper in some spots, so maybe that the opposite of what you want:That's a lot better of an update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimEOBrien Posted July 20, 2012 Author Share Posted July 20, 2012 Which one of these is preferred: Left or right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthPollock Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 Right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
henburg Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 This is a really nice-looking concept! The new color scheme is a definite improvement, and I would go with the one on the right. One thing that I think that you could edit would be to take away the little navy line above the script. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimEOBrien Posted July 20, 2012 Author Share Posted July 20, 2012 I'm thinking something like these for uniforms - no white so as not to confuse identities with the Dynamo: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 What's the name of the font you used? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimEOBrien Posted July 20, 2012 Author Share Posted July 20, 2012 What's the name of the font you used?MLS 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayman Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 just a minor tweak.. above the wordmark, please remove the tiny blue line. (the darker blue line that goes through the orange) And vast improvement from the first post, and I love seeing any Puerto Rico team concepts lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimEOBrien Posted July 20, 2012 Author Share Posted July 20, 2012 Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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