AusGiant Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 Hey Guys, First time poster on the boards so go easy on me. Made this logo for my College (High School for the Americans out there) as it's looking to rebrand for next year. Looking for some help in regards to what needs improving, changing and whether the font suits the logo.Any criticism is welcomeJust a bit about the logo;The drip represents an odd sculpture near the schoolThe star on the left represents West Melbourne DRIBBBLE - BĒHANCE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 So colleges in where your from are actually like american high schools? Good logo, but i think that the change in direction for the s is to sharp #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 I agree with STLCards on the angle of that S, but its a solid design other than that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AusGiant Posted July 21, 2013 Author Share Posted July 21, 2013 So colleges in where your from are actually like american high schools? Good logo, but i think that the change in direction for the s is to sharpYeah, College = high school in Australia.I agree with STLCards on the angle of that S, but its a solid design other than that.Thanks for the help guys. Any ideas on how make it less sharp? DRIBBBLE - BĒHANCE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 Make it curve instead of a sharp drop. curve like a round object #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 I agree on the S comments. This is a sharp look overall. So what do they call the level after college? University? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TShaw528 Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 Do they have a mascot at all you could possibly incorporate into the logo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 I actually like the sharp cut in the S, Looks like to shape a book or something, like going onto the next page. I like that. If you're going to round it out though, I would say round out the shape above it too. Hell even making it look like the binding of a book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AusGiant Posted July 22, 2013 Author Share Posted July 22, 2013 I agree on the S comments. This is a sharp look overall.So what do they call the level after college? University?Yep, UniversityDo they have a mascot at all you could possibly incorporate into the logo?Nope, our sports teams call themselves the Lakers thoughThanks for the input guys. I'll tinker with it some more and post the changes soon. DRIBBBLE - BĒHANCE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AusGiant Posted July 22, 2013 Author Share Posted July 22, 2013 Huge difference. The new ones heaps better than the original IMO. Thanks again guys DRIBBBLE - BĒHANCE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MatFatCat Posted July 25, 2013 Share Posted July 25, 2013 I think the new logo would be better actually without the top thing on the shield.Good work so far, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mordred58 Posted July 25, 2013 Share Posted July 25, 2013 I know you've got the star to the left to represent West Melbourne, but that makes the interior of the shield look a little unbalanced to me...could you move the drip from the bottom of the shield to the right side (underneath the "C") to balance the inside?and the rounded letters look better to me as well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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