Sidney Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 I'll consider to change a bit the mouth, show more teeth, and add something in the eye area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 Your updates are getting better and better, so good for you. But I feel the logo is too vertical. Other than that, it's developing nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 Your updates are getting better and better, so good for you. But I feel the logo is too vertical. Other than that, it's developing nicely.I agree with BlackBolt.The progression of this logo has been all good.What are you working in...Illustrator?How would it look if you just gabbed everything and pulled it a tad wider?Overall, this logo is a definite upgrade Sidney. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 Thank you mates , to Sparky: Yeah I am using Illustrator to Blackbolt: I 've tried to broke the verticality but I have to found something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 little update, the coat is shorter on the proposals. I think it resolved the problem of verticality ? no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 Both are very nice. I think I like B. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 Thanks Every feedbacks helps me to get it better. Thanks to everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 Ok, I'm nitpicking here, but maybe if you bring the chin out, kinda like the actual logo. But you're there, you're right there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben5 Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 FIrst off, the most recent update is miles ahead of where you were when you started. Nice job. The thing that's bothering me the most, however, is the way the collar obscures part of the chin. Is there a way to move the collar down below the chin altogether? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 Of course, I'll try something with the collar, maybe something like a shirt with a low collar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoleYourRole Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 This is a fantastic update. Really can't tell which design I like the best. One suggestion, it would be cool to work the WF in there somewhere - maybe the accents of the jacket, or maybe as a button. Just a thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 Thank you mate, it's a good idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 I've changed the chin, tell me what you think. Next step is to incorporated the WF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 the one on the left (A) is very good. I like the collar w/o the longer lapel/sharp edges. Your concept has really come along nicely - great work!!! Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoleYourRole Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 Not too crazy about the new chinslittle update, the coat is shorter on the proposals. I think it resolved the problem of verticality ? no. I think the A above is the best one I've seen yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 Thanks for your feedbacks, I've tried to update with differents ideas that members gives me. So I think that parts like it now or how it was before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 I prefer the larger collar, actually. What if you combine the A and B with the larger collar, bringing it more forward with the gold highlight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mordred58 Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 I prefer the larger collar as well. The smaller collar, to me, indicates normalcy...the way a regular guy would dress. the larger collar feels more sinister and threatening. That being said...I'd prefer "B"...also, in a nit-picky sense, it looks like you've still got some dark gray lines floating around in the hair (around the ears) and in the face versus the had and collar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 "Big collar A" is great.(...Could maybe throw a slash of gold at the base of the collar.)Good job! *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 Thanks for your feedbacks, I'll work again on it to incorporate what you said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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