JoHyphenE Posted September 25, 2013 Author Share Posted September 25, 2013 Idaho Appaloosas 2.0:I've reworked the Appaloosas logo according to your suggestions and this is what I came up with.Better, worse, indifferent? Let me know what you think! Thanks for looking! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 25, 2013 Share Posted September 25, 2013 Idaho Appaloosas 2.0:I've reworked the Appaloosas logo according to your suggestions and this is what I came up with.Better, worse, indifferent? Let me know what you think! Thanks for looking!Much better, although I think that there's still 1 think missing. I think that it might be the eye. Much improved. Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted September 26, 2013 Share Posted September 26, 2013 Idaho Appaloosas 2.0:I've reworked the Appaloosas logo according to your suggestions and this is what I came up with.Better, worse, indifferent? Let me know what you think! Thanks for looking!Much better, although I think that there's still 1 think missing. I think that it might be the eye. Much improved. Great work!Yes, I agree, make the eye bigger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted September 26, 2013 Share Posted September 26, 2013 This logo still needs a lot of work. Your linework is too thin, the spotting is not organic and natural, and the anatomy of the head reminds me more of a giraffe than a horse. The ear is too small and looks like it's coming out directly above the eye. I know you've been using reference photos, which is a very smart thing to do, so I give you credit there. But choose some reference photos of just horses heads to nail the anatomy better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 26, 2013 Share Posted September 26, 2013 Maybe make the neck a little shorter. I agree with Whittier S about it looking like a giraffe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted September 27, 2013 Author Share Posted September 27, 2013 I'm not completely finished with the update for the Appaloosas, but I reworked it by redoing the eye, increasing the thickness of the lines, and changing the hair, head, and ears a little. I'm still working on the best way to do the spots and I'm not sure if I'm completely sold on the pupil or not. I took a good amount of inspiration especially for the eye and hair from Western Michigan.Please give me some feedback as to how to best go about with the spots. Other C+C appreciated. Thanks again for viewing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 27, 2013 Share Posted September 27, 2013 I'm not completely finished with the update for the Appaloosas, but I reworked it by redoing the eye, increasing the thickness of the lines, and changing the hair, head, and ears a little. I'm still working on the best way to do the spots and I'm not sure if I'm completely sold on the pupil or not. I took a good amount of inspiration especially for the eye and hair from Western Michigan.Please give me some feedback as to how to best go about with the spots. Other C+C appreciated. Thanks again for viewing!The mouth as a straight line is the only thing that is bothering me. Maybe fix that, add the sppots, and you've got yourself a really nice concept. Fantastic work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 27, 2013 Share Posted September 27, 2013 Nice job, curve the mouth and you're good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted September 27, 2013 Share Posted September 27, 2013 Curve the mouth, make the lines on the neck thicker, and you got yourself a pro logo, great work.Oh also add a pupil, the horse kinda looks possessed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted September 28, 2013 Author Share Posted September 28, 2013 I thickened the necklines, changed the pupil to black, and added the spots, hopefully this is done! Thanks for all of the C+C! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 28, 2013 Share Posted September 28, 2013 Better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 28, 2013 Share Posted September 28, 2013 I thickened the necklines, changed the pupil to black, and added the spots, hopefully this is done! Thanks for all of the C+C!LOVE IT! What progress you made on this one! FANTASTIC! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 28, 2013 Share Posted September 28, 2013 Great job, can't wait for the uniforms! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted September 28, 2013 Share Posted September 28, 2013 A+++ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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JoHyphenE Posted September 29, 2013 Author Share Posted September 29, 2013 I attempted to re-do the bevel based on the Admiral Vladivostok logo, but now I think it almost looks like I just copied it...New or Old what do you think? Also is the new one too close to Admiral Vladivostok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 29, 2013 Share Posted September 29, 2013 Just for referenceI think the new version is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted October 1, 2013 Author Share Posted October 1, 2013 Bumping for some more C+C before I move on to the next team Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted October 5, 2013 Share Posted October 5, 2013 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted October 5, 2013 Author Share Posted October 5, 2013 I guess I'll keep Providence as is. I'm moving away from the last charter member for this next concept. Louisville was granted a PFL franchise that would begin play in 2000, being the eigth expansion team in the league. The city wanted an outside of the box name and eventually settled on the Louisville Balloons to try and raise the popularity of the newly founded Adam Matthews Balloon Festival (now Bluegrass Balloon Festival) that is held in Louisville annually. It has since become the fifth largest balloon festival and largest in Kentucky. The team has only been around for 13 seasons, but they already have 2 championships to show for it ('06 & '10). Here is the logo:The colors come directly from Louisville's city seal and the fleur de lis is modeled after that as well. I think the basket needs some work since it is so plain, but other than that I'm satisfied with this concept. C+C appreciated once again, thanks for following! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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